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for Parallels

by Lazuli

person Rasengan22
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aah, I didn't know this was on AFF, I'm glad I found it on ff.net or otherwise I would have gone insane that it wasn't complete. I love this story so much, and rather than ramble on here, I already sent like a 10 page e-mail of praise to questofdreams. I didn't have your e-mail, I should probably send you it, too, since you co-authored. But I'll spare you because I blathered on forever and sound like an idiot. But I love love loved this story. I hope you put Ch. 13 up soon, because that was my favorite. I know people will love it! I absolutely worship your writing skills. WORSHIP.
person Jess
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh. I absolutely /love/ your story! I love how you portray Yondaime... It makes me really wish he was alive and with Naruto! It's sad how they don't have much more time together..

And the whole parallel reality thing is just great! Especially how they switch everytime they do something the same.

All in all, I really absolutely love this story!! I can't wait until the next chapter, and I hope that when Naruto goes back that he will have this new ability to show everyone, like Jiraiya, so they believed that he actually got to meet Yondaime and all that. I hope you write about that in like, an epilogue or something.. ^^

~Jessica
person Gloomy
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I knew I was gonna love this story after reading just the first paragraph...and now, after reading all of the 12 chapters in a day...I can say for certain that this is one of the best SasuNaru stories I've ever read (and I've read plenty). The plot is unique yet believable...I love how you use the parallel characters to help the original characters with their problems...very brilliant. I also love how you write your characters...the ones we know are very much in character, and you described the Yondaime as I would've imagined him, which is definitely a plus. Everything about this story is so awesome and intriguing...it really kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. I'm looking forward to the next chapter (in fact, I'm desperately begging for it)! Keep up the great work, both of you!
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah, how did he know his dad wore orange before as well? or did the change al ready happen or what? update! this is soooooooooooo cool!!!
person sumomo-kun
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries* goddamn you!!!!!!!!!!!!1 why???? oh gawd the cliffhangers THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *.* (please continue? <3)
person Kori Nibiki
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Geh! What a cliffhanger!!! *pouts, followed by a sigh of resignation* Keep the writing coming you two. Can't wait to see how the perminant switching turns out. Until the next update, Ja!
person TwlightDreamz
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Must have more gimme more!!!!^_^ Now I even more hooked? Sorry for the lack of words bit I'm falling asleep here... sorry It has nothing to do with your story, It's the damn medication I'm on :( oh well..... When I wake up I'll drop you a proper review. Ja ne for now
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was another AWESOME chapter...hehehe...Who knew that Naruto could be such a TEASE!!! LOL..and Sasuke...geez never even THOUGHT that he could do stuff like that...hehehe:D thanks:D
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
8-Oh man, that was GREAT so they both Naruto's and Both Sasukes were in the kitchen together cooking...CUTE!!!! that was really erally NICE...THANKS:D
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
9-oh man, I lOVE your STORY!!! its FANTASTIC...GREAT chapter:D THANKS:D