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by Lazuli

person Yurikai Kurosaki
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Soooo GoooooooDD
This fic is kicking ass BAD!! Awsome!! Great idea you two have here!
And the way Naruto stays in character is unbelieveble!! I wonder how he got in this "world" though?? Hope to find out soon!!
=^_^=
Keep on going!! This is great!
See ya
Yurikai Kurosaki
person DazeWolf
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, let me say this is the BEST fanfiction I have read in a REALLY long time. I'm so happy to have found another good one to look forward to reading. ^^ Both of you did a lovely job on this! The characters are really realistic and the whole story just glows with some feeling and mood of...eh..I don't even know but it's really cool! XD I love how you described and depicted Yondaime, just perfect! ^^ The chapter was so looong too! If the chapters are going to be this long, you aren't going to update very much, are you? ._.; Well, I'm hoping you do, your story is really amazing! I found absolutely no grammar or spelling errors, the plot is original and well developed, and the imagery is lovely. ^^ Pretty please update as soon as you can! I just can't wait for the next chapter! *squeal*
person Choister
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. I. Like this.

Update fast. Update soon. Here, let me give you a dollar.
person Marie
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just wanted to tell you that this story has the makings of something that will be really, really nice in the future! There's only one chapter yet I'm loving it already! I've read a lot of Quest's stories as well. I'm glad that your collaborative work with her is going so nicely. I hope you update soon, because I'm really looking forward to reading another chapter of this fic. All the best to both of you!
person Shingo the Pest
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for this fic for forever. A fic where Naruto somehow ends up in the past or a parallel world with his dad. You have no idea how excited I am!!!! *absolute squealing fit*
person Leasan
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!
I'm utterly, totally dumfounded. It's so fascinating that it's impossible to name all the things I love about it, just too many of them!
So... two Narutos switched places? Will they ever communicate? Or will we ever see the 'happy Naruto' in the unhappy reality? And the pain to live happy life now but still having all those painful memmories. And sasuke being NICE?! So what, now it's Naruto who's going to be a cold, outstandish bastard because his life is totally upside down? And what about Itachi and Uchiha clan, they're obviously alive 'cause sasuke is not cold or bitter...????? Jeez, all the possibilities!!!!!!
I can't wait to read more!!!
UPDATE ASAP!!
person YJ
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI again!! i was wondering what of the neckace tsunade gave to naruto? izzit still with him or did that never take place @ all? =p