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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! This is getting good!! Please keep on writing! ^-^
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uhh did you just like update six chapters at once, or was I just really out of it?
LoL
nontheless
this is a superb fic and I am eager to read the rest
very eager
so please,
update soon
^ ^
LoL
nontheless
this is a superb fic and I am eager to read the rest
very eager
so please,
update soon
^ ^
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, more updates! I swear my eyes were crossed when Naruto and Sasuke were arguing about why Sasuke kept touching him after he knew it wasn't his Naruto. It was really funny. You guys did a great job conveying how confusing it all really is.
I really enjoy this story. It helps that there are two awesome authors working together. Will you be doing anymore projects together in the future?
Oh, and Lazuli, when will you update Skeletons in the Closet? I'm dying here.
Ja! ^_^
I really enjoy this story. It helps that there are two awesome authors working together. Will you be doing anymore projects together in the future?
Oh, and Lazuli, when will you update Skeletons in the Closet? I'm dying here.
Ja! ^_^
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really awesome. <3 I adore this fic.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally an update! Woohoo! I was hoping to see... er, read the training session between Naruto and Yondaime. But that will be in the next chapter, right? Great work, and keep 'em coming. Ja!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*finally decided to review* XP I decided that if I'm willing to read a chapter more than twice I just HAD to review! XP *loves chapter 5* and omg the suspense!! I was like !! 'noooooooo!!!!! you can't leave it there!!' lol That night before I went to sleep my mind was mulling over all the possible reactions Naruto could have to that and the different scenarios that could happen XP I love the way this fanfic is going and you're keeping Sasuke and Naruto so in character (at least, I think they're in character ^^) Kudo's to you!!! I also LOVE Skeletons in the Closet, and QuestofDreams, Conviction! Keep up the excellent work!! I hope you can update soon and I patiently await the next chapter!!! This fanfic makes my fangirl self squeal with much delight ^^
~Yuri, the Overly Obsessed Yaoi Fangirl~
~Yuri, the Overly Obsessed Yaoi Fangirl~
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you finish this soon. I haven't enjoyed a fanfiction this much in years.
You have a fabulous writing style.
I love it.
Keep it up!
But.. keep your eyes on your punctuation and grammar XD
You have a fabulous writing style.
I love it.
Keep it up!
But.. keep your eyes on your punctuation and grammar XD
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! now the original sasuke knows and tsunade knows... so at least things may be a lil easier on the other naruto when they switch...? and blushy sasuke..ooh that's fun heheh, so perhaps he is hiding his true feelings for naruto hmmmm ^___^ can't wait to read what happens next!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
This is one of a great story, really! The idea is great, your style is appealing and the characters and their relationship are well worked out. I long for more chapters.
It's rare that I have nothing to criticise... Hmm I think I'm going to read another one of your story (though Skeleton is only PG-13 ;-)).
So long,
Nathaniel
This is one of a great story, really! The idea is great, your style is appealing and the characters and their relationship are well worked out. I long for more chapters.
It's rare that I have nothing to criticise... Hmm I think I'm going to read another one of your story (though Skeleton is only PG-13 ;-)).
So long,
Nathaniel
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet, totally wicked, love it. please hurry soon