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that was AWESOME...GREAT chapter...I really liked this but man, I guess they can't grasp the magnitude in which Naruto was treated...That was just a GREAT GREAT chapter...and that part was hilarious...doesn't this mean that you are cheating on me...or something...hehehe...THANKS

omfg... you MUST continue! This fic is so awesome! meep! moremoremore! kudasaaaaiiiii!!!!

Yay.^.^ they finally got some!! Yay!!!!! of course the whole, 'aren't you cheating on me with myself' is a little bit of a mind twister, but then again those are the fun things. Pobre Naruto, quiere qudarse con Sasuke y Yondaime y no ir al otro mundo. But Naruto has too much pride to let even another version of himself get Sasuke and leave himself in a world he is not used to. AHh. I am really enjoying your story. Thank you for writing it.

Dude, this fic is fucking awesome!

Yup... the story is really beautiful...

it's making me wonder what the other Naruto in the real naruto world is doing? how did sasuke react? and don't let him jump on sasuke ok? like this sasuke did to naruto... What i mean is Sasuke is officially/exclusively Naruto's... ok? (don't you think mu reviwe was very confusing?)heck you know what I mean anyway right???

Anyways... I feel that this other Naruto is much much more spoiled than our original Naruto and of course brilliant (please don't make him jump on sasu-chan, ok?)... I like my original Naruto better although Im still curious on how would the real konoha react to the other Naruto and vice versa... that would have been fun to read.... hmmnnn....

Anyways its like... Our real Naruto is better... he's got the Jutsus but not much of the brain part... the othe one was honed properly... both brain and jutsu... but does not excel in anything in particular... Hmmn... An ordinary Great Ninja.... where as our Naruto is a Hardworking and Independent great ninja...

Am I still making some sense? Oh well... Never mind ^__^

back to the topic... Damn! I love youndaime... Honestly... but Damn! He's too nosy! nope, not nosy but rather... WHY! OH WHY DOES HE ALWAYS COME OUT IN THE MOST INAPPROPRIATE TIME!??? WHY! it's like he loves playing pranks on the two of them!


One question, hope you'll answer... how does the two of you write? would it be like... you write, then afterwards when you don't know what to write next , the other one will continue it? or there's only one writer but two ideas and the other one just checks on what the writer writes to see if it fits what he wants? Honestly, im really confused coz there are some parts in the story that i don't even bother reading at all or I read but even though ive just read it, i tend to forget it ASAP. Im sorry about thar but tha's just how i feel that was why i was bothered and wanted to know exactly how your style goes.... it also happens even within one paragraph. or maybe i'm just not im my proper state of mind when I read your fic...

please if your too bothered with this... don't mind me nalang, ok?

OVER ALL... I TOTALLY LIKE YOUR STORY... THE IDEA IS UNIQUE AND THE SET-UP IS VERY DYNAMIC.

this is wonderful! i felt a pang in my heart all throughout reading this fanfiction. i really want to see how things pan out. Naruto's reaction seems so reflective of what I would have thought and done myself, I really do think you guys did a good job of it. Please keep up the good work and continue to update because your work is uncontestingly appreciated.

Wow...you two are really plowing along with an awesome story. It's definitely an idea that I haven't seen used very often, and it's executed beautifully (but that's kind of what I expected from you two) ^_~ I'll be keeping an eye out for more of this one!

I cry. Sob. I laugh. I ache. I REALLY need to see more of this....

this story is soooo cool, i've never read anythig like it. i'm a little confused but i think i get what's going on. is naruto shifting into an alternate relality? and if so, how's it happening? i think it's awesome that sasuke and naruto are together but i feel so bad for the naruto from the relality that we know. Life had been horrible for him and now he's been subjected to a world were he's loved by a father and practially everyone around him. to experience love and have it ripped away is just to bloody sad, i don't care how you do it, just make it so naruto doesn't have to be alone anymore. i really really hope you update soon cause i want to read more of this fantastic story!

just found your story, you have a very sweet tale going on here. love how the naruto we are use to is seeing a life he could or should of had. poor other naruto is probably so lost right now...feel sorry for when naruto we know has to go back to his old life. can't wait to see where you take us with the story next please keep with it, your doing great.