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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY nicely done! Poor Naruto, flashing back and forth between dimensions, the time-space continum must be severely screwed up. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading more!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Darn Yondaime! Right when it was getting good! I feel sorry for the other Naruto, having to deal with bastard Sasuke. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please post soon!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that is just an evil place to end it. Are you going to have Naruto and Sasuke always fustrated? Poor babies. At least this chapter answered the question of, if our naruto is in this world, where the heck is their naruto. In a way though i feel sad for him. pobre corazon, maltratado toda su vida. I am completely enjoying your story since, while not an original idea it is written in a way that is not what you usually find. EIther way please keep up the good work and i'll be waiting in suspence for the next chapter. ^.^
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kitsune:Bad Yodaime! he needs to go to a corner and think about what he's done *stamps foot and starts pouting*
Sasori: What did the Yodaime do?
Kistune:He interupted Sasuke and Naruto just when it was getting good
Sasori:*sighs* their are other chapters its not like you wont see opportunity in the future*smirks* not unless she discontinues the fic
Kitsune:Oh Kami! NO!!! *kneels down to beg at authors feet* please oh please continue this fic.... It's Really Great! I LOVE IT!!!
Sasori: What did the Yodaime do?
Kistune:He interupted Sasuke and Naruto just when it was getting good
Sasori:*sighs* their are other chapters its not like you wont see opportunity in the future*smirks* not unless she discontinues the fic
Kitsune:Oh Kami! NO!!! *kneels down to beg at authors feet* please oh please continue this fic.... It's Really Great! I LOVE IT!!!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Alternate!Naruto... It would really suck for you to have a great life then wake up and have a horrible one. I wonder what's going through CanonSasuke's head right now...
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GODDAMN IT YONDAIME!! WHY THE HELL DO YOU KEEP INTERRUPTING?!??!?!
Shesh, sooooo~ like a parent....
The transitions between words are surprisingly easy to follow, and I like how Naruto's personality is familiar with Yondaime's. Excellent chapter!
Shesh, sooooo~ like a parent....
The transitions between words are surprisingly easy to follow, and I like how Naruto's personality is familiar with Yondaime's. Excellent chapter!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigosh..ur killing me here...what kinda timing does the Yondaime have....i do like how you have incorporated where the other Naruto has gone. I like how Sasuke is suspiciously near Naruto in both worlds. great job! but cmon..no more interrupting the wonderful lemon scenes. =)
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a unique plot. I can honestly say I've never read anything like this before! ^__^ Keep going.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is like Naruto falling into the *Twilight Zone*. Or one of those strange Star Trek episodes with parallel universes. I feel bad for the other Naruto though, he's probably more confused than the original one. You've written quite an intriguing story here, look forward to the next chapter...
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! Good naruto fics is so hard to find! And I find yours...OMG!!!Continue plz, or I`ll die! (dies) / \
Yondy yay! Sasu/naru yay! In next chappy plz tell some more `bout Naru`s mommy & Uchiha family (had Itachi EVER killed the entry clan ect)Ï\\Ï
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Yondy yay! Sasu/naru yay! In next chappy plz tell some more `bout Naru`s mommy & Uchiha family (had Itachi EVER killed the entry clan ect)Ï\\Ï
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