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by Lazuli

person Anon
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! OMG! The most interesting and original Naruto fic I've ever read :D Kudos for you able to build Yondaime's persnoality even though not many of him mentioned on both anime and manga. He's just so much like Naruto. Though I'm pretty confused as why did he dissapprove of Jiraiya's teaching on Naruto at his early age even? Anyways, keep up the awesome work and don't forget Conviction as well. I want some NARUSASU actions ^0^

Ganbare!

May
person Stranj100
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I like the concept and I'm eager to see what happens next.
person cve
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You two bring out Naruto's conflicted emotions so well. You can really feel Naruto's longing for his father and his confused desire for Sasuke. As for Yondaime being his father, I really hope that's revealed one day as canon. I can't see him as anything but, with all the hints revealed so far.


Excellent story; I look forward to the rest of this interesting tale.


cve
person bhodi li
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think with Naruto having so much trouble in this "too good to believe to be true" universe, it would be a nice story or side story to see how the Naruto of the "yondaime is my father, sasuke is my lover" universe is doing being the "orphan, no one wants me around" universe.
person chikara
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice and very interessting
person Chyvon
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WEEEE! This second chapter was awesome! Poor Naruto, you just wanna cuddle him and tell him everything's gonna be alright. I love the way you're doing the Yondaime. I can't wait to see what else is going to happen. It's a great story, please update soon! Please?
person Leasan
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome, AWESOME!! I LOVE this hapter! I can't wait when they start to realise what happened to Naruto. Or when we get to know what's up with the whole Uchiha clan :) And what about orochimaru? Is he a villain at all??
Update asap, I'm dying of curiosity!
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I like the concept!

Though it's pretty obvious it was that jutsu the target performed that Naruto so _intelligently_ (:rolls eyes) took for Shikamaru that caused all this, I can't believe Naruto hasn't put two and two together yet. Wonder when he'll figure it out...?

I can't wait to see how you run with this. ^_^

(Chapter 1)
person KitsuneFun
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story but, I couldnt help but, wonder what the other Naruto from this reality is doing. Well, as always I hope you keep up with the story since I interested in seeing what happens next
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:) I love seeing a Naruto who knows more than he's supposed to (given the situation) start acting differently than everyone expects. It's so amusing!

And now I really want to know if he's been sent into another world, or if this really is a form of genjutsu. But I wonder why neither Sasuke nor Yondaime are reacting to the facts of Naruto's past. If anything, shouldn't his father and even Sasuke (who was in his class) know of how he graduated? Shouldn't they correct him and tell him what "really" happened?

I love how you're characterizing Naruto and Yondy (being a prankster and all that ;D). And again, can't wait until the next update! ^_^

(Chapter 2)