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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Poor Neji. Hiashi is such a bastard. xDD
I LOVE SASUNEJI !! :DD
Keep writing.. Pleeeaassee??
I LOVE SASUNEJI !! :DD
Keep writing.. Pleeeaassee??
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea (or maybe you do?) of how much I need you to continue this fic. As for any OOCness. I think they were very true to character apart from one or two deviances. I wonder at Sasuke's response when he learns the truth. Gods, can Neji be under that damned curse for that long without permanant reprecussions? Ack...Will Sasuke find him in his room with the seal still activated? So many questions, so tired. I must run off to sleep and so I shall. I'm keeping an eye on this fic because I love it.
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Why haven't you uploaded these last four chapters on AFF sooner, huh? I absolutely loved the first chapter, and had I known there were more, I would have read them in a heartbeat.
Thanks so much for this fic. Neji/Sasu sounds more appealing now, since your Neji has so much back bone. I usually don't like that pairing since it seems too lovey-dovey for me, but you work it just fine. I sense romance coming up. I hope to see it soon!
SlutNeji is actually quite nice. It's only natural that a character of such grace and hotness should be a total sex god, alongside Sasuke and Gaara. That threesome is really attractive. I'm sorry to see it go.
But whatever you do with this, I fully support you. The character developments - especially Neji's - are very good and descriptive. This fic is very well done. Excellent work!
Poor Sasuke, though.
Thanks so much for this fic. Neji/Sasu sounds more appealing now, since your Neji has so much back bone. I usually don't like that pairing since it seems too lovey-dovey for me, but you work it just fine. I sense romance coming up. I hope to see it soon!
SlutNeji is actually quite nice. It's only natural that a character of such grace and hotness should be a total sex god, alongside Sasuke and Gaara. That threesome is really attractive. I'm sorry to see it go.
But whatever you do with this, I fully support you. The character developments - especially Neji's - are very good and descriptive. This fic is very well done. Excellent work!
Poor Sasuke, though.
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far, its's so dark but so real at the same time. When I first found it, for some reason I thought it was a one-shot. I'm glad it isn't.
So, great job! Update soon, alright?
So, great job! Update soon, alright?
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well #1 here.Snort.i never saw that before.....but OK yeah.i am of the devine 3rd sex (just fir your info).This fic hard ,cruel,cool.That man has to die,yup.utter prick.Hinata helped Sasuke or not eh? I bet.I thought this was a one off but this is much better, a huge fight ahead though...honestly does Neji really think he can say that to sasuke and not get a reaction,his karma came fast too.Itachi is a prick here or sasuke would not be so,snort again fucked up.very literaly........maybe ,he didn't confirm it.I like Neji's idea of power play.I won't ruin you is always the question in these things..a balenced Dom is RARE so I am glad to see he is good at that.Plenty to think of here.Watches Naruto well he is gay and Naruto is his teammate so its not so weird.why love?
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, well, darling. Wonderful, of course. You really don't need me to tell you that, but I will again anyway. Really wonderful. Depressing as fuck, but in a good way. You know what should happen next? Sasuke and Neji should run away together and live happily ever after, with lots of cuddling. Yes, unlikely, I know, but I keep hoping.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooohh...that has to be THE hottest scene I've ever read! Man, the way you described everything, you could help but see it all in mind's eye. This was very well-written, very awesome and---can't say this enough---hot ass read!!! XP EM
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm doing this again because I loved it so much. Write more, please!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, but I wanted them to whip Sasuke for his punishment in the end. You're mean to give such anticipation and then take it away. Even a little spanking would have been better but oh well... Very hot, smutty story though :)
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much and I love all your work, in a weird 2am angst-smut craze type of thing. I am really hoping to read more of your writing some time soon.