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for Learning the Ropes

by Potemkin

person shar
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw... great story, very hot, but evil cliffhanger! Can't wait for more, if more is coming.
person Arichan
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It great, but... but... I WANT CONTINUATION! Onegai!Potemkin, I know you're kind,you'll write a nem chapter, right?
P.S. forgive me my terrible english,i know it's terrible :)
person Ven_Ven
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT WAS SO AWESOME AND WELL WORTH IT!
person hITOMI
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so yummay...WRITE MORE!!!
person Leasan
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's me again, with a little remark: I just realized why I hesitated before reading your fic ( thanx god I did, eventually! :). It's because in the summary, you wrote "nymphomaniacs" and these are horny WOmen, not men... I just thought you'd like to you know :) Ja!
person Leasan
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's the kinkies, hottest, most orgasmically delicious smex ever !!!
Please, I beg you: write MOOOOOORE!!!
Torturing Uchiha is just too good to let it go easily, right??
And adding Naruto somewhere on the way would be just lucious! Even if it was only longing in Sasuke's mind!!
God, I can't even find appropriate words to say how arousing that all is and can, even more, be...
person MultifacetedTune
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous -- wonderfully written, creative, and best of all, they were in character! ^__~ I loved it -- keep up the good work!!!
person leona
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe i love the story ^^
please write more!