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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to review when I finished reading your fanfiction. I LOVE it! ^_^ It's good and rare to see a ShikaIno on this site, much less a non yaoi fic. LOL Seriously, I thought it was great. The lemon at the end was WELL worth the wait, and I love the other 6 chapters of your story. Hope you keep up the good work.
P.S. I liked your fanart for this fic. :)
P.S. I liked your fanart for this fic. :)
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>__>;; I don't know when you made this but oh well. ;o; The whole story was cute <3 (The sex part made me giggle at parts XD). >:3 What whores they were like what thirteen!? Anywho I like this ssoo much I think i'll draw picture for it. My DA account is http://genmari.deviantart.com/ ( >__>;; I know im to young to be on here but oh well). Ssshhhh dont tell anyone XD. Well i'll try and finish it as soon as I can =D. Of course it might take awhile because im lazy. I hope you'll make more like that ;o;.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite well done, but you did seem like you were rushing through the last chapter, which is why in future stories, consider epilogues. Hehe, most people who read it don't realize that Authors do tend to rush things at the end (incredibly common, and even experiences writers can do it from time to time.) And so they will take the time of writing an epilogue so all the rushing falls to it, and the last chapter is left somewhat untouched, it gives it a better feel to it.
overall, I give this story a 9.5/10 fanfic rating!
overall, I give this story a 9.5/10 fanfic rating!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great ending. Finally got the ShikaIno loving...and it was GOOD. This was a really good story, so congrats on finishing it. Maybe you could write more ShikaIno, since you do a very good job writing them.
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP! I'm reviewing you!
It's pretty good! I like the plot development (even if it's just the cute stuff). My only complaint is the spelling/grammar mistakes. They have gotten better, but your beta is missing some pretty big things. Other than that, this looks like it's going to wind up being pretty good!
ectweak
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It's pretty good! I like the plot development (even if it's just the cute stuff). My only complaint is the spelling/grammar mistakes. They have gotten better, but your beta is missing some pretty big things. Other than that, this looks like it's going to wind up being pretty good!
ectweak
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot! can't wait for the smut! I'm so excited to see where you take this! Update soon.
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOSH-AAAAAAAAAAAH! LEMON SCENE COMING UP! I'm so happy.
I loved the dads, and the scene at the end with Shikamaru and Chouji was classic. Exactly what they would be like. so your reading of the manga and such definately payed off ^_^
I loved the dads, and the scene at the end with Shikamaru and Chouji was classic. Exactly what they would be like. so your reading of the manga and such definately payed off ^_^
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out to be a good story. I had a little trouble following it at first, but I'm glad that I kept up with it. I generally don't read the Ino/Shika stuff, because I'm not a huge fan of Ino, but you are doing a good job with them. I look forward to more chapters, keep up the good work.
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaw, that was so cute. I loved the whole team 7 bit in the beginning. classic!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
quite good, quite good, look forward to the next chapter! I'll let ya know if I ever make that Naruto/Hinata fic.