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for One kiss

by mieran

person Fluffy
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
-twitch- 3 chapters. 3.. that’s all I get? Seriously? What the hell is wrong with you! You can’t just post chapters of perhaps one of the better stories on Aff and leave it hanging there. Seriously!
person kati
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so cool i can't wait for you to update though the writing is a little stiff...perhaps you could make it more casual? Familiar?
person berkie88
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
which pairing is this going to be? not that it really matters since I like Naruto with almost any boy from the series...
anyway, I've never read the story before the edits but I like it now anyway. so please continue soon!
person Emrilou
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good start... interested for you to continue..
person frizzy197
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
still waiting for that next update...
person Elizabeth-San
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was really good i had alot of emotions flowing through me when i was reading it.i was laughing at the part where Naruto said"i dont have to look at you're ugly face everyday any more"sounds like something i would say if i had to move.and the flash back was sad then got better when Itachi stopped and helped Naruto it was so sweet of him^_^i cant wait until naruto meets sasuke naruto would proably be like "wow he kinda looks like that guy who feed me back then"
person berta-chan
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this is such a great story!! loving it so far! i really hope that sasuke will come into the next chapter though, so he can instently fall in love with naruchan! hehehe. was the guy in the flash back that gave naruto the sandwhich itachi? because that's the impression i got. anyway, great fic!! i hope u update soon!!
person blisblopi
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.I like the flash back.I loooove Itachi.
person blisblop
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I understood what he was wearing.Good start.I like.
person masako
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a cute story and i hope you hurry back to continue...teehee.
GOOD LUCK!!!! good start