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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry back,good start!Good luck,remember, no matter what,this too shall pass.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I won't quit how am I going to when i'm already starting to fall in love with your story
so please please update and fast XD
thanx for reading have a good day:)
lo.oli
so please please update and fast XD
thanx for reading have a good day:)
lo.oli
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
where are you ?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story you've got going on here. I'd like to read more. ^_^
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I like the story! XD True, true, you do need a beta. If your still looking for one, I would love to help! <3
Btw, no, Haku doesn't have a last name.
Btw, no, Haku doesn't have a last name.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As far as the story goes - it looks like it can be a very interesting one but the text's too short to decide about that. Yet it's long enough to realize one thing: you need a beta!!! The number of mistakes (typos, spelling, grammar, collocations...) makes it hard to read.
Yet I love SasuxNaru and AU so much that I read it anyway and if you correct the mistakes it's going to be a really nice prologue!
So get a beta quickly and... update!! ^_^
Yet I love SasuxNaru and AU so much that I read it anyway and if you correct the mistakes it's going to be a really nice prologue!
So get a beta quickly and... update!! ^_^