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for The Kakashi Mission

by JBMcDragon

person cynaga
schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So beautiful~! A classic...
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know I'm so not close to finishing this yet, (I just finished chapter 5) but I had to say that this is so awesome, so far. I love chapter 5, with all of the children dragging Kakashi into the water. Just perfect. And then Kakashi getting "their leader." I love your writing so much. You make the characters come alive without making them ooc. I am in love with this story, and, therefore, I will waste no more time in writing this review, and get back to reading.
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really cute :D I'd love to read the sequel :P Do you have a direct link there perhaps? I'm kind of lazy :P

<3
Nora
person The Readers Have Chosen
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations! You've been rec'd!

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person Missmurder111
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ive been looking all over for this story!!! i read it once before but i didnt get to finish it but now i did and i loved it!!! Kakashi and Iruka r my fav couple!! in fact my wallpaper is of them kissing. thanks for a great story cant wait for another one of them!!
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the oddest stories I've read... I had to keep reminding myself that the seriously disfunctional, neurotic, obsessive-compulsive nut case was supposed to be Kakashi. It was hard to picture him as this bumbling escapee from the loony bin... not that it wasn't well written, it was a very good story and there's no doubt you're a great writer. Iruka seemed to be in character, but most of the others, not so much, with the most unbelieveable being Kakashi... perhaps another character would fit this main character better, although off hand I can't think of one.
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Parts of this made me want to cry. I love stories like this! Wonderful job!
person Nickname
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Best. Story. I've. Ever. Read.

I think it's safe to say that I've officially fallen in love with you. AWESOME job!
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God I loved this story. I can't get over how realistically you wrote the characters. Finally Kakashi as something other than a dirty pervert. I can fully see him as this damaged, socially-inept guy (just like Itachi would be). I mean he spent his childhood with ninja much older than him, and that usually affects children and they find themselves unable to associate with others. I cried about 10 times reading this story and couldn't bring myself to stop. I now have 2 hours to finish writing my Psychology essay *swears furiously* before I head over to lj to read the sequel :)
person Ashcat
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this was so amazing. I love this story! I love how messed up you made kakashi that was so realistic :) I love how long it took for them to get together and how there was many obsticals along the way. You wrote in such a realistic and believable manner! Thank you so much for sharing your writing with everyone!! I only wish there was more - like where they are in 1 year, 5 years, 10 years heh did Iruka get Kakashi out of some of his habits, what were Iruka's habits and neurosis!