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for The Kakashi Mission

by JBMcDragon

person Komikitty
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uwah! Iruka-sensei is sooooo COOL!
but Ow, that HAD to hurt...
Hurry Kakashi! Hurry!
Please update soon!
=^_^=
you can't leave it like this....
pleeeeeeeaaaaaassseeee?
person Monkie
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness!Poor Iruka!-cries-SOMEONE NEEDS TO SAVE HIM AND THE CHILDREN!I totally thought he was going to be raped in the forest when the ninjas asked him to strip.Heh.Shows where my mind was going.At any rate, this is such a good story and way to keep it interesting!Now I want to see Kakashi beat the crap out of the missing ninjas. ^.^; Update ASAP please!!!
person ffpanda
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Poor Iruka!!! Wow, this is getting so exciting! Of course, I'm missing K/I smoochies, but I'm sure they're coming ;-)

Really great!!
person lo
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. I love the whole field trip/hostage situation thing. This really had me on the edge of my seat. Keep up the great work.
person Lady Gray
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, very in character and plot driven.
person AtsumiHaruko
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is it possible to write KakashixIruka any cuter?! I think not. Such a sweet interaction between our favorite senseis... ^_^ I'm looking forward to the *promised* update!
person lo
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is sooooooooo wonderful. It is getting harder and harder to fin intelligent writers when it comes to fanfiction, hell and fiction. I love what you are doing with the plot and the character development. I wish there were more people like you who care about there writing and are not just out whoring for some attention. Keep up the great work.
person Komikitty
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! You tease! You here I thought, oh well.
But it was nicely done in any case, very well written.
Heeee.
=^_^=
person A-Person
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D Oh these are just getting better and better! I just loved these chapters! I can't wait to read the rest!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, the only thing better than a paint-covered Iruka is a chocolate-covered one... although whipped cream is nice, too, I suppose.......... ^__~ Thanks so much for the update, and congrats on your "novel" accomplishment, lol! ^^ Very well done -- I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!