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for The Kakashi Mission

by JBMcDragon

person ffpanda
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, poor Kakashi!! It's so sad...I really feel bad for him! Which means, you're doing a fantastic job. You've drawn me into this story completely, and I can't wait for your next update!!
person vashta
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I a really enjoying this. They are one of my favorite pairings, as a matter of fact I don't like to see either of them paired with anyone else. You have an original take on Kaka, I could see this being the case, please don't let Iruka be too hard on him. He is way too kawaii not to forgive!!!
person Kanakatana
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it. Please update soon! Poor Kakashi doesn't have any social skills. Iruka has to forgive him, he has to!
person lo
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story!!! I did not expect it to get so deep. Great job, I like what are doing with the character. Keep up the good work.
person sarahi
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice i like it lol update soon!
person anonymous
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
xDD THIS IS SOOO SWEET~ i love this fic... You're writing is AWESOME. :D
person Komikitty
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bwa-ha!
When I read the first chapter I wasn't sure I was going to enjoy this story,
but after the second one I just couldn't stop reading!
Poor Iruka, poor Kakashi! We always seem to end up hurting the ones we care for most.
Really great! I look forward to reading more.
=^_^=
person Scarecrowqueen
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. They way you've written you're charcters as so utterly flawed and human amazes me. This fic pulled me in and chewed me up and spit me out in the very best possible way. I'll be checking everyday for updates!
person Barnners
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Kakashi's insecurities, Iruka's temper, you have really flushed out a whole new side to the characters. Your retelling of their background stories is done remarkably well and is not confusing. All the angst and drama are beautifully tempered by moments of sweetness and humor. Please keep updating! This is definitely one of my top favorite Naruto fictions now.
Sin.,
DL
person lo
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great!!! You are really ginving the reader a look into the characters, nice writing.