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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a fun read. I like where it is going, and what you have done with the characters. Keep up the good work.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just... wow. I'm not usually ALL that into Iruka/Kakashi, though I will read it occasionally, but this story just blew me away. It's so funny and yet realistic at the same time, and I love what you've done with Kakashi's character. You've kept him IN character, but still given him more depth and explained him a bit.
I really can't wait for an update. You said the story's finished, but the rest of the chapters just need to be beta'd? I'll hope for something soon, then.
I really can't wait for an update. You said the story's finished, but the rest of the chapters just need to be beta'd? I'll hope for something soon, then.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I believe that was wonderfully in character. Even though there was no smut in it I fell in love with it. The flashbacks are filled with so much sorrow...i fell in love with kakashi all over again! I even got my plushie of him and hugged him while i read this fic. Update sooon!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ive been sobbing throughout the last couple chapters..literally balling my eyes out and just..wow...Ive never done that before because of a fanfic. It seems like Im watching a movie play itself out, with all the raw emotions and just the right touch of drama and romance and angst.. I love it..so absolutely and entirely love it right now Im starting to cry again ;-;
And-and....I thought it would be really pathetic if I did this overemotional review on your story because its so wonderful and intoxicating I thought you'd at least have five hundred reviews...But you only have five... FIVE. Maybe this is completely insane, but that pisses me off. Im saving this story to my computer and printing it off to show it to my friends and itll have your author name and the link to this on it and Ill ask them to review.
Gah...-pets story-;-; I luff it so much..please review soon. I was hesitant in reading it at first because Im more into the Iruka-centric fics more so than the Kakashi-centric fics... But the last couple chapters...wow... Its nice to see that for once Iruka isnt just cringing away and he's stepping up and reprimanding Kakashi while at the same time not becoming this asshole. Well, I'll admit, he's acting a bit stiff right now, but that's to be expected after what Kakashi said. I was pissed at Kakashi for saying that too...but I am a little too emotionally involved with this story lmao.
I hope the next chapter is just as long as the rest, and maybe Iruka will have some drama on his side? Maybe be a little angsty as Kakashi was towards the begining? Not a suggestion, just what my over-obsessed twisted mind has fantasized. But I admit, I would even become more obsessed with this story, if that's possible, if it had some Iruka angst in it. -does a little jig-
-Biokinetic-
And-and....I thought it would be really pathetic if I did this overemotional review on your story because its so wonderful and intoxicating I thought you'd at least have five hundred reviews...But you only have five... FIVE. Maybe this is completely insane, but that pisses me off. Im saving this story to my computer and printing it off to show it to my friends and itll have your author name and the link to this on it and Ill ask them to review.
Gah...-pets story-;-; I luff it so much..please review soon. I was hesitant in reading it at first because Im more into the Iruka-centric fics more so than the Kakashi-centric fics... But the last couple chapters...wow... Its nice to see that for once Iruka isnt just cringing away and he's stepping up and reprimanding Kakashi while at the same time not becoming this asshole. Well, I'll admit, he's acting a bit stiff right now, but that's to be expected after what Kakashi said. I was pissed at Kakashi for saying that too...but I am a little too emotionally involved with this story lmao.
I hope the next chapter is just as long as the rest, and maybe Iruka will have some drama on his side? Maybe be a little angsty as Kakashi was towards the begining? Not a suggestion, just what my over-obsessed twisted mind has fantasized. But I admit, I would even become more obsessed with this story, if that's possible, if it had some Iruka angst in it. -does a little jig-
-Biokinetic-
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. I'm all about the I/K pairing and add a little jealousy and triple the enjoyment, I can't wait for more.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I laughed, I cried, I became angry! This is so wonderful. I love your Iruka and Kakashi. Your interpretation of Kakashi was just something else and I love how you portrayed Iruka. Please keep it up! I look forward to your update!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I laughed, I cried, I became angry! This is so wonderful. I love your Iruka and Kakashi. Your interpretation of Kakashi was just something else and I love how you portrayed Iruka. Please keep it up! I look forward to your update!