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for The Kakashi Mission

by JBMcDragon

person Adela Nightmoon
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI! i just spent the last two days going through all the slash stories, looking for Sasu/Naru slash, and one thing i found, is that Kakashi/Iruka is good... anyway, your's is perhaps the only story i've read though that k/i is the main pairing and i loved it!
Okay, so Kakashi isn't in character, and I hate that normally, but I love what you've done with your Kakashi and how their relationship progresses. I laughed so many times at Kakashi and his odd habits...
God, i sound like a love-sick Sakura... please, stop me...

anyways, the point is, i loved it!
person sadistickiss
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Genius... pure genius. Ah, the whole story was amazing.
Kya~ I feel like I've been given a strange sort of 'honor' to be able to have read it ^^ Thank you.
I loved your Kakashi, he was so cute, and so vulnerable (pssh, but your Iruka was cool too =])
Thanks for writing this, it was a pleasure to read ^^
person Bealmira
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had to review again. This is just a wonderful fic. I love the way that you portray the characters, and give depth to them. I love the way you write Gai. He's crazy, overly happy, and just great. I love it. I don't think I'll stop loving it. This fic has charm, it has something that I know will make me read it again and again. It's just cute and charming and lovely. It's so great. So yeah. I love it. I love you. Keep writing!
person Bealmira
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't wait until the end to tell you. This is such a great fic. It's cute and sweet, and I just love it. Especially the part in chapter five (I think…) where Kakashi checks on everyone while they're sleeping. I just love it. You can make such a strong character in the series so vunerable seeming and I like it.
person Sir Magus
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i luv kakashi and iruka pairiings!!! they r just so perfect together ya know? anyways i luv ur story and i cant wait for the next chapter!
person supergirlanna
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was beautiful!! i was reading it nonstop yesterday and just finished it this morning!!! soooo good!!! it's wonderfully written and i love how the relationship evolved like that and and... *sniffle* it was just sooo beautiful!!!
person Drew
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Exellent! The best 'novel' I have ever read.
person dk_joynotsignedin
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this fic today. I was going to wait to review until I read the end, but this chapter (6) was just too cute (the last part). Seeing Kakashi and his parents interact and the way they love each other was precious. It was really bittersweet, knowing that Kakashi lost that. But at least he had a loving family, right? So did he learn to cook from his father? Anyway, this fic is very good (as are your others) and I'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing your stories!
person dk_joynotsignedin
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This is such a wonderful fic! So sweet! The ending was perfect! I loved it! I've gotta read more of your fics sometime soon...
person throwerchick
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was by far the most amazing fic I've ever read. Hands down. You. Are. Amazing.