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for The Kakashi Mission

by JBMcDragon

person Lazuli
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm....

Just want to say how much I really adored this fanfic. Yep, stayed up all night to finish reading it, because I loved it so much. ^___^ You really wrote Kakashi really well, about how he would act, his past and why he does things the way he does. It was a fantastic and most enjoyable read.
person B. Raven
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BEST DAMN THING EVER. congrats n__n
person jiyunja
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god i absolutely love your story!!! it's so beautiful! i mean man.. that's the best story ever (and not just in the naruto category!) until now i've read so many different storys but i swear on my life, not a single one was as good as this one!!
i mean first of all, it's KakashixIruka (my favorite pairing*g*) second: the past of kakashi is so well written! third: the time changes are really great!
and even with 20 chapters (which means it is kind of a long story) there was not one single time i felt bored!
man i'm absolutely in love T_T i can't get enough... all i can think of now is: AWWWWW kakashi is SOOO sweet! *g* really, you left no wish unstatisfied (sap, angat, lemon, yummy i'm so happy, there should be more of those storys out there!) can't you write another one with the kakashixIruka Pairing? i need more.. seems like i'm a junky now *lol*

i'm so happy right now i can't stop my mouth from babling *g* man... there is nothing better than a statisfiing yaoi story *g*
i think i'll read this story over and over again, till i'm able to remember every single word!

so thank you really much for this great piece of yaoi!!! (and keep going please >_< would be so glad to read more..)
person Santurion
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You want to know how good your story is? I've read it at least five times in less than two weeks! That's how good it is. As corny as it sounds, I can't get enough of it. The way it's written, the way you describe the characters, the way...I don't know, everything. I really enjoy it every time I read it. Thank you for writing it! And for sharing! :)
person Fan1
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing story. It was my first Kakashi/Iruka fan fic and I loved it.
It ended so quickly, it seemed. :( I am looking forward to reading more of your fics
and other Kakashi/Iruka fan fics. You have an awesome tallent. Keep up the great work.

Cya,
Fan1
person yaoilover12
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was just reviewing some seriously awful fics, and then thought to myself, 'wait, why am I wasting my time reviewing stories I don't even like?' So I decided to focus on stories I absolutely love. And yours was one of them (yay!) Seriously, though, great writing, awesome characterizations, decent plot, and a wonderful ending. You inspired me to read more KakaIru fanfictions.
person telluli
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did it end? NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
That was brilliant. You wrote their first time together so sweetly. Usually it´s like "bang, bang, feels good" but now it was just "AAAAAWW!! Kakashi is such a sweetheart."
God damn, YOU`RE GOOOOOOD!!!!

Thank You.
person yurathewicked (not signed in)
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, i really like how you ended this.

this story was well written, engaging, and very heartfelt. i enjoyed it immensly. nothing was rushed and the flashbacks were masterfully done (informative but not too lengthy or distracting). thank you for such a wonderful read!
person Navis
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome, couldn't stop reading it.
person The Magic Sock Prince
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! THAT WAS THE SWEETEST ENDING EVER. I LOVED THIS FIC, ITS THE BEST ONE I'VE READ EVER ( AND I'VE READ PLENTY ;] ). WELL THE ONLY THING WAS IT WAS SUPER LONG, IT TOOK ME ABOUT 8 HOURS OR MORE TO FINISH READING THE WHOLE THING. I'VE BEEN READING SINCE LIKE 10 P.M. AND ITS NOW 5:30 A.M. WELL I LOVE YOU, KEEP WRITING, AND NEXT TIME DON'T WRITE 17 F*ING LONG CHAPTERS BEFORE GETTING TO THE SEX. YOU DON'T WRITE IT RIGHT AWAY, BUT YOU EXAGERRATED A LITTLE, DON'T YA THINK?