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for The Kakashi Mission

by JBMcDragon

person A-Person
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, it ended! :( I loved every minute of the story. It was funny, meaningfull, and lots of blushy moments. ;)
person Gingitsune
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad to see the end of this wonderful fic. I really enjoyed reading this story. The way that Iruka managed to slowly overcome Kakashi's emotional barriers and the sweet get-together they have. Awww~ I really enjoyed this fic very much. Thank you for sharing.
person lo
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is just so wonderfully written. No one character comes across a cliche, like som many other authors do. This is just a look into human nature with trimmings. It is great.
person hinshihoushi
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great piece of work. Especially liked how you portrayed the characters. The flashbacks were very well done giving just the right amount of information and emotion to show how your Kakashi's character developed. Thank you so much for sharing and can't wait to read more from you.
person hogo-chan
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so freakin' cute! I'm so sad it's done but that was so sweet i don't know what to do! I think I might melt into a puddle of squeally fool! Oh my god! words cant express how awesome you are for writing this amazing fanfic! You're just too awesome! ^_^
person Sin
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story. Hope to see more fics from you in the future. Keep up the good work! X3
person Hobbit
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaahhhh * crying* that was so sweet!!! Kakashi was so worried! *sniffle* this is wonderful!!!
person jingko
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wowo read all in about 2 days time. no sleep there, but i loved your story so much. can't wait for the next chapter!!
person Sneaky-ninja
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gah!!!! plz hurry and post the rest of the chapters damnit!!!.....sorry lost my cool.....sigh.... -.-
person ruka
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is such an amazing story! I read it in one go!
Although your timelapses kinda confused me in the beginning, I got used to it after a few chapters, and even started to love it! ^^
I really like how you explain or clear up their current actions by describing parts of their past. I've never seen this as a way to describe someones feelings before, but I loved it!

Please update soon!