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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm crying right now, you know. Damn you and your ability to make these things so gad damn heart wrenching.
Doesn't matter, I needed a good cry anyways :)
Doesn't matter, I needed a good cry anyways :)
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This, by far, rocks! Totally rocks! I am amazed by it, really. I was up until 2 am this morning reading this piece despite the fact that I had midterms later in the day. Heh, still, the characterization, the structuring, the plot... By jove! I enjoyed every minute of 'The Kakashi Mission'. I'm in a delirious state of anticipation just holding out for the next chapter. I love the backstories that you provided, and the interaction of the characters that were delightfully in-character despite the humor, despite the fumbles of the couple in question. I mean, you made Kakashi work. You held him true to who he was, and you are the first that I've encountered who has carried this torch for the Jounin--in literary form, and done it so well. Not to mention the dialogue: light-hearted, clever, and witty... and very intelligently scripted. This is a treasure because you write well, and it seems, you took the time for character study, for molding your own world to canon, and making it a treat. I appreciate a thorough author who has the capacity to see 'underneath the underneath'. What you've captured from the Kakashi Gaiden arc (I'm assuming), and turned into your own prose is what leaves the reader with a riveting flashback that makes the whole, the entire fic, well-crafted on every level. Really, keep up the good work. I love the pairing, and because the darkness in my heart desires the smut, I'll hope for it whenever you crank it out. Brilliant job! Happy writing days! ^^
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, this fic is wonderful. ^.^ I love it tremendously. their relationship is just wonderful, and so is your characterization of them. I LOVE neurotic kakashi. ^-^
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I havent reviewed before even though I have been reading this for a while and I LOVE IT! I love Kakashi and Iruka and this story is so great! It sounds corny but I await each new chapter with bated breath!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome, keep it up
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Morrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeee please gimme a new chapter. I luv your story ^-^
And i luv IruxKak pairing. Your story rockkkkkkkkkkkkkkssss!
And i luv IruxKak pairing. Your story rockkkkkkkkkkkkkkssss!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. You are painting a wonderful picture with this story. I am so impressed that you are not writing the way everyone else writes. I am soooo glad that this story has not turned out to be one big cliche. You are doing very well. Keep up the good work.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah!So sad/cute at the same time.I love how protective Kakashi is in this chapter, yet I was expecting him to come out of no where and kick some missing ninja butt in the forest.-rofl-And Iruka with his hair down?Absolutely awesome.I'm still drooling while picturing all of this. xD
Update ASAP. ^_^;
Update ASAP. ^_^;
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, they're so cute together. I liked how Kakashi was just being a little too overprotective and how Iruka responds with sarcasm. Like the whole forest kidnapping thing. Haha, yea. Anyway, good story. I like how you write.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the emotion in this chapter is almost overwhelming. I'm so completely drawn in by your story!!!