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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O
UUUWAAHHHH!!!!!
SOOO CUTE! SOOOOOOO CUUUUUUTE!!
*sniffles*
I especially liked the comfort scene, it sounded so warm and real!
YAY! They're getting closer!
*does the Happy Hamster Dance*
Keep up the spledifirous work!
(And update again soon!)
=^_^=
UUUWAAHHHH!!!!!
SOOO CUTE! SOOOOOOO CUUUUUUTE!!
*sniffles*
I especially liked the comfort scene, it sounded so warm and real!
YAY! They're getting closer!
*does the Happy Hamster Dance*
Keep up the spledifirous work!
(And update again soon!)
=^_^=
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Review of chapters 15-18:
YAY!!!
Poor Iruka!!! That's awesome that He got scars the same way as with Naruto...you know he'd do it a thousand times if neciassary! XD Ignore the typos.....
Anywho...I really liked the drama of those latest chapters!!! I was glued to the screen! Poor Konohamaru....he'll understand though, and learn for his mistakes.
Too many typos to write more sorry...love this story and you!
YAY!
~alisha
YAY!!!
Poor Iruka!!! That's awesome that He got scars the same way as with Naruto...you know he'd do it a thousand times if neciassary! XD Ignore the typos.....
Anywho...I really liked the drama of those latest chapters!!! I was glued to the screen! Poor Konohamaru....he'll understand though, and learn for his mistakes.
Too many typos to write more sorry...love this story and you!
YAY!
~alisha
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
first thought off the ttop of my head, completely unfiltered:
AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!...
i was actually really exspecting Iruka to get raped at some point there but its good he didn't because 'Kashis's already a few cards short of a full deck. and i luv Kono, right on!
AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!...
i was actually really exspecting Iruka to get raped at some point there but its good he didn't because 'Kashis's already a few cards short of a full deck. and i luv Kono, right on!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
overprotective Kakashi...so wrong...and yet...so very right! CUTE! and sad! Iruka handeled it real well. i wouldn't have.
STOP WITH THE DAMN FLASHBACKS! ita gettin' real old real fast!
kakashi was startin to scare me there for a second. i was lie,"he's goona lock iruka up and never let him out EVER!"
STOP WITH THE DAMN FLASHBACKS! ita gettin' real old real fast!
kakashi was startin to scare me there for a second. i was lie,"he's goona lock iruka up and never let him out EVER!"
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snivels* SO CUTE ;-;
I really liked it :}!~
it was really in character and... romantic :}~!
waiting for another update ^^~!
I really liked it :}!~
it was really in character and... romantic :}~!
waiting for another update ^^~!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story. the last part was interesting thought. Kakashi needed to be comfort and Iruka did it well. He won't die because he's firend with Kakashi, he,s okay.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...your evil...I LUV IT!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh! I want next chapter!
I want to know what will happen to the kids! I need to know!
That's a brilliant story very well lead and the character are really endearing.
Thank you for the story.
I want to know what will happen to the kids! I need to know!
That's a brilliant story very well lead and the character are really endearing.
Thank you for the story.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-grabs kleenex- ohmygod. I don't think it was supposed to be sad, but I cried anyway, and I don't know why...
but now I feel better. :D Keep writing or I put snot trails on you XD rawr
but now I feel better. :D Keep writing or I put snot trails on you XD rawr
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!~ so Iruka like :O
and I was really afraid for Iruka ;-;
poor him ;-;~!
and now he's hurt ;;
... Kakashi better kick all of their asses, or else >>~!
~waiting for an update~
and I was really afraid for Iruka ;-;
poor him ;-;~!
and now he's hurt ;;
... Kakashi better kick all of their asses, or else >>~!
~waiting for an update~