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by sharingank

person Choister
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo nnnnnooooooooottttttt Saaaaasssuuuuuukkkkkkkkeeeeeeeee...... NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
person cheshik
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, I just clicked the "enter" button for no reason. O_O

Sorry if my English sucks.

OK, so great story! Naruto and Sakura is such an obvious couple, but no one does it good like this. Everything was so sweet and happy! I mean, besides Naruto and KABUTO (everyone bow!), Sasuke is like my favorite character. But then Sasuke.... he got a sad ending, but it's still enjoyable to read. Like, Sasuke disappearing again didn't ruin everything! It's weird... but good, haha.
person cheshik
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, I'm choi-sama!
person Nem
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it very very much.
It's very romantic and lovely.
The sex wasn't graphic - it was beautiful lovemaking, and had a proper place in the story.
You really feel for the characters, and there's a psychological realism in the storytelling.
(Funny thing is, I don't even like Naruto...)