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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really
Baths, showers - they don't serve the purpose they're supposed to serve when you've got two hot boys in the vicinity.
;D
(loves)
Baths, showers - they don't serve the purpose they're supposed to serve when you've got two hot boys in the vicinity.
;D
(loves)
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww. i liked it. y'know.. i went back and read this cause my friend JUST got me into Naruto. well. i watched like one episode cause it sounded cool. and i would have liked it better if i knew what was going on. i get it now! lol. so she got me to watch like four episodes and let me borrow the first two volumes of the manga. it's a start..but you have to start somewhere. ^^ so yes, now i can say i've read all of your fics on aff. LoL. cause i'm a dork like that. :D
love ya. ^^
Ra
love ya. ^^
Ra
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, awesome fic. Your lemons are uber hot, and your fluffy stuff is really cute. Very well written, although I agree with a previous reviewer that they could have started out with something a bit less...I'm not even sure the word. A blowjob would have been nice, and fit in well for the first lemon.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Beautiful update. Love the impending emotions you focus on in your last update :D I'm definately hoping for another ^^
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, I don't hate you... I just hate the teasing, but I also love the teasing...
Wow did I confuse anyone else?
Wow did I confuse anyone else?
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a yummy little story! As a avid Narusasu fan, I loved how Naruto seemed to have control even though at first he was on bottom (I hate how many writers portray bottoms as always 'uke'). Great job!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drools at the thought of a uke Sasuke* wow, i always had Sasuke pegged as a seme, but hey, either way works! you did just fine, believe me. my only criticism isnt about your writing, its about the way that you answered reviews. and that is that there wasnt any room inbetween each response, so it was hard to distinguish were one response left of and the next began. other than that there was nothing wrong that i saw. SASUNARU ROCKS! ja
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o *twitch* I think i need to open a window or something cuase that whole scene was HOT! Woo! I love this fiction and can't wait for more (please don't take that a harassment for chapters I hate when people do that to me so I'm not trying to make it seem like that's what I'm doind to you =^^=)
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SasUKE!!! Ohohoho... That was amazing!! I love this lemon, my god, it pushes all the right buttons!
Awesome, I love the way they build the trust. The short panic in the morning made the later passion all the more delicious.
I hope you'll update soon!!
BTW What the hell is with this new layout on aff??? Can anyone explain it to me? 'Cause I hate it! Is it temporary? damn... I hope it is
Awesome, I love the way they build the trust. The short panic in the morning made the later passion all the more delicious.
I hope you'll update soon!!
BTW What the hell is with this new layout on aff??? Can anyone explain it to me? 'Cause I hate it! Is it temporary? damn... I hope it is
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, very scrumcious. And you did a very good job with the whole morning scene thing. It was very realistic and very well done. Can't wait for more of your work. But then, you already knew that, didn't you? ;)