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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter :D
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The first time I look at Naruto slash and I find my that my favorite YYH author also does Naruto. Small internet, ne? I've really enjoyed what you've written so far. I'd love to see another chapter. See you around at the cafe.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! a steamy chapter...so is Sasuke or Naruto going to regret this??? hmmmm...Naruto makes such a cute uke..i like how the story has them fighting even when they are "doing" it. =)
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm...the one line that really blew me away was:
"He brought his lips down, kissing the mark and around it as his own arms drew Sasuke closer to him. He could feel hands in his hair, holding him where he was, encouraging him to continue his exploration."
I don't know why, but it did.
"He brought his lips down, kissing the mark and around it as his own arms drew Sasuke closer to him. He could feel hands in his hair, holding him where he was, encouraging him to continue his exploration."
I don't know why, but it did.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drools* wow, that was great!! i cant wait to see what happens next!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, wow, wow......*picking jaw up off the floor*, that was great...what can I say, I like my smut ^_^ I thought you kept them in character wonderfuly well, and I liked how they got together...great descriptions by the way *whew, is it hot in here or what? *cheeky grin* I can't wait to drool over...wait I mean read more!!!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If it'll make you update faster... --# I hate it when you ruin the good mood with a review request. I was happily thinking, and then you tell me to review. XP Evil Colleen.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely glorious. That had such passion and fire! I absolutely loved it, and I can't wait 'til you post another chapter! And please don't forget to IM me about it, or I'll never realize it's been updated. Luv ya, as always. ^^
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I love your story. I think it's great you took your time with lemon, cause now it's paying off. Keep going! Please..
I love your story. I think it's great you took your time with lemon, cause now it's paying off. Keep going! Please..
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI! Back from being computer-inactive, and always happy to see you updating! Great (two) chapter! And yessss... i like your sence of spice in your story! WMahaha! *bit crazy i guess* An' don't you dare not updating, what about us who DO review, can't leave us hanging, can you?
Anyway, this last chapter was sisssssling hooooot!!!! Damn! ^.~
Anyway, this last chapter was sisssssling hooooot!!!! Damn! ^.~