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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, you sure know how to make people review... ^_-
I love your story, the way you write, the mood, the intimacy..
And the lemon is irresistibly HOT!! I love the way Naruto trusts Sasuke completely and how caring and tender is the latter. It makes them act without restraints or shame.. My, how convinient ^_^
So, please update!! I want more of that tasty citrus stuff!
I love your story, the way you write, the mood, the intimacy..
And the lemon is irresistibly HOT!! I love the way Naruto trusts Sasuke completely and how caring and tender is the latter. It makes them act without restraints or shame.. My, how convinient ^_^
So, please update!! I want more of that tasty citrus stuff!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story wild hot sex :D
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kukukuku.. really good! I can't wait to see what happens next. Will Sasuke and Naruto stay together and will they tell everybody. or will the feel ashamed and deny it..uuh..I like your style. Especially the part where Naruto denyed the pain. Jut what he might do! :DD like very much <3
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was a really hot lemon; very nice. I liked the hesitation of the characters and though it could be annoying {as we all wanted the lemon} the chapters were broken up at the right points. I'd like to see more of this, it's cool!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, with all the pleading und threating I will give in and give you some mental food :D
First of all I do like your story so far - except the standard mistake to place Sasuke on top AND let Naruto beg. Don't know what's wrong with all of you fangirls :P Just kidding (although I prefer a equal relationship (even in the sexual department) or a slight dominant Naruto... But your hint for the next chapter let me hope :D)...
A second thought: Why did you let them rush so fast towards full blown anal sex? Both of them were sexual unexperienced. The bits of heavy petting in your story are rather hot and I wouldn't mind it if they were just giving each other a good old handjob. But that is just an idea - I won't prescribe you your speed of developing :)
So, please continue delivering us with this delicious story,
Nathaniel
First of all I do like your story so far - except the standard mistake to place Sasuke on top AND let Naruto beg. Don't know what's wrong with all of you fangirls :P Just kidding (although I prefer a equal relationship (even in the sexual department) or a slight dominant Naruto... But your hint for the next chapter let me hope :D)...
A second thought: Why did you let them rush so fast towards full blown anal sex? Both of them were sexual unexperienced. The bits of heavy petting in your story are rather hot and I wouldn't mind it if they were just giving each other a good old handjob. But that is just an idea - I won't prescribe you your speed of developing :)
So, please continue delivering us with this delicious story,
Nathaniel
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. it has very good characterization. i hope you write more.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... I hate you...
But I love the story... ;_; Damn you Colleen.
But I love the story... ;_; Damn you Colleen.
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok this is a bit dif.I like.
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO. GOOD. Woah, man, the descriptions... I love it XD~~ YOU MUST UPDATE ASAP!
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH I love it!! its very well writen, i cant wait for more!!! Oh if you dont want this deleted you need a disclaimer thingy. Otherwise, yay!!!!