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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NICE NICE NICE! :D I loved it! Why would you expect flames for such a good story?! Man, that was just AMAZING! :D That was PERFECT! angst and everything! :D Thank you so much! ><
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, i really liked it!!! something about it really got to me...i cant put my finger on it, but it did!!!
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May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was unexpected. Most unexpected. Well written though.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Greatness...ltle bit angsty.
~adios~
~adios~
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF? Why do you expect flames? *slaps*
YOu did a really great job here, y'know. Keep it up!
*slaps again* And no more of this "expecting" flames
YOu did a really great job here, y'know. Keep it up!
*slaps again* And no more of this "expecting" flames
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, shit. I have to say I love it. The writing style totally compliments the whole plot, and the man being called Sasuke just made something inside me go "Well, damn." How Sakura knew exactly how many days since she last heard the name Sasuke was good too.
ANd Naruto...Well, Naruto was perfect. Thanks for writing this!
ANd Naruto...Well, Naruto was perfect. Thanks for writing this!
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was intense...I don't know what else to say except that you shouldn't expect flames; I don't remember any mistakes at all.
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good fic...
I'm in split mind though ^^ I would like to see it continue, but it has such amazing impact as it is! But if u continue u can count on I'll read!!
I'm in split mind though ^^ I would like to see it continue, but it has such amazing impact as it is! But if u continue u can count on I'll read!!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even though I prefer Naruto with the 'real' Sasuke, I really like your fic. Nice job!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I don't really have any words. I liked it though. A little sparse in set-up, but what's there definitely does the job. Deeper things are made apparent subtly, rather than explicitly stating them. Like, gee, how /is/ Naruto able to act so perfectly like a young starving whore? And Sakura's assumption--that a ninja pretending to be a whore never actually needs to do the dirty--frames her actions in the mission.
And Sakura was right: the old bastard being named Sasuke was just a low blow.
And Sakura was right: the old bastard being named Sasuke was just a low blow.