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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No flames here. Your writing style is very interesting, clipped and very effective for dark fics. interesting story.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good.Shinobi can not be all fun and games.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Would you like a beta? I beta for a few people already, but I don't mind beta-ing for anyone else. Just e-mail me if you want me to beta for you, k?
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it. I'm looking forward to seeing some more of your work.
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I liked. A very good story. Keep up the good writing. Ja!
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorta confused as to what that whole thing was about but it was interesting nonetheless and a little sad yes it was very sad
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this! It's a good story! I was a little confused as to why naruto would let the guy fuck him if he was going to kill him anyway, but then there would have been no story...soooo....hmmm...maybe Naru kun wanted Sakura to see him get fucked by this "Sasuke" guy? .... O.o anyway, i like the creepyness of it. it's nice! good job!
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting fic. I have to say, I've never read anything like this before. Well done, if a bit unusual -- keep ip the good work!
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ..... wow .... I like it ^^
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the line about Sasuke betraying them all over again
T_T And it kinda hurts in a way that Naruto no longer cares about being hurt by Sasuke (whether it's just a namesake or not. symbolism~ XD)
I don't know why you expect people to flame you but I think its pretty good.
T_T And it kinda hurts in a way that Naruto no longer cares about being hurt by Sasuke (whether it's just a namesake or not. symbolism~ XD)
I don't know why you expect people to flame you but I think its pretty good.