rate_review Reviews

Wow ! I really love your story. Its not filled with cheesy fluff or anything! Its very realistic, and i love how you kept Kakashi's demeanor the same. I really hope this isnt the end! Keep writing!

DEAR GOD! That was so hot! It's gotta be some of the best smut I've ever read. Please do go on with this fiction, I love it!
Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

I thouroghly enjoyed this fic. Possibly, the fiction I've most enjoyed on this whole entire site! Chapter, after chapter, I just wanted more and more! I ate it all up! :) Not just that, your intimate scences, are just, delicious! Exquisite! I love the way you write! You write in a way that we can relate too, I loved it! More? Please :D

definitly sated! lmao...what does that word mean at the end? lol i can't remember it now...does it mean sated? or something...good chapter!

*claps* I am not much a fan of this pairing, and I was more interested in following the Sasuke Naruto friendship (I had thought from the summary and the first chapter that it would be a dark fic about them wherein Sakura and Kakashi fall for each other in the middle of it) However, by the time I got to the second chapter, I was hooked on the entire idea of these two and couldn't wait to see them together! The story jumps a bit between chapters, but that is the only critical note I have, everything else about it is WONDERFUL! And the characterization fabulous. I adored Genma, you've almost made me into a genma fangirl with this... all I'd need is another fic *laughs* The game between Sakura and Kakashi reminded me a little of LeafyGirl's KakaSaku SasuSaku (slight) fic of which the title I can't remember for the life of me, but still... I liked it. I LOVE the relationship between team 7 and the result of the KakaSaku upset. I also like the way you portray Sasuke in this--I'm a Sasutard--and was all gush like when you described his sudden possessiveness as one of his need for family as opposed to him really being attracted Sakura (which I think is a lot more honest and true to his character) Really, I can't gush enough about this fic ^_^;; Much love to you for it!

*meep* one other note: loose <-- opposite of tight ^_^;; This was one of those 'near' homophone-ish words that seemed to trip you up a couple times. No biggie though, not too distracting. If you're ever up for site archiving though (which this fic so deserves), I'd recommend this minor editorial fix.

When's the next chapter going to be up? XD

I like how you keep everyone in character, keep up the good work!

Amazing story! I'm a big kakasaku fan and this is one of the best I've ever read. Keep up the awesome work! I'm looking out for more!

Hey! Where's the rest of this story?
Please, update!! *0*
:P

Love the fic! I can't wait to see what happens next.