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for It Wasn't Love

by insomniac247

person StoryJunkie
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew! That was really really good. That Sasuke! So aloof! you got his character down perfect. I like how the two of them meshed, like they understood each other, so cold, yet so hotly passionate! Good job!
person azuuei
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are so evil.. I can't believe it.. *laughs*
So evil.. it just makes me sooooo.. happy.. *evil grin here please*
Can I have you? Please? *kidding* ;)

And here I was, thinking that this was already real. You have a way with words, it felt real. And Dear, bless us with more of your works. *hugs*
person alex
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thumbs up!
person DeadUchiha
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this pairing. It's very plausible too, well, except for her probably being dead, but yeah. They never ACTUALLY said she died. Bah that doesn't matter. Anyway, It's good and i like! fits well with your other story too. I think it's a good grasp of both of the characters and their motives...but aw...poor Tayuya...I wonder how much of Sasuke's attraction was due to her having pink hair??? o.O *chuckles* Nyah! Looking forward to more from you!
person blisblop
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sways,grabs desk.Yuummmm...CRASH!Fantastic outlook.Reads true.
person Kireiko
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. The pairing isn't one of my fav's but it is quite believable and you do do them such justice... very, very nice. *devilish grin* I ~do~ wonder what an adult Sasuke would look like. And an adult Tayuya would be a vision I imagine as well. Nicely done. Hot. Passionate. Almost desperate, yet detached. I liked it. Good job.

Keep up the good work.

~Kir