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for Without a Mirror

by Nushi

schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was a very very well done short. Quite beautiful in its meaningfulness and character writing.
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you should leave it as a oneshot. It was so beautiful and innocent, that by adding more, might taint it.
person Narsa33
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was nice. I hope you write more.
person apogee
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWESOME DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, I do hope you continue with this, I really liked it, Mmmhmm.
person DeadUchiha
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bwah! I love it! Beautiful! I hope you decide on doing more. Nothing wrong with continuing with a simple naughty situation, but an actual story is appreciated as well. I wasn't even really a fan of this pairing, but it's starting to grow on me. XD You captured the moment in this perfectly. It had the lazy, easygoing feel that one would associate with Kakashi even though it was told through Sakura's perspective. I really enjoyed this one. Nicely done!
~Dead
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice...well written.
person KagomeGal
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you should definately continue. it's to good of a story to leave hanging like that. absolutley brilliant
person Zelha
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was pretty good! *0*

I love this pairing! That's why I'm going to beg you to continue this story!

Congrats!

Z ~
person allyluv17
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nushi! you rock!

please definitely continue if you can come up with more ideas. naughty would be excellent!!