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for It's Wrong

by Nidaba

person frodolass http://www.livejournal.com/users/frodolass/
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was surprisingly enjoyable. I am not a fan of the SasuNaru pairing by any means, even though its really blatent in the series, simply because I think Sasuke is an overrated pickled bitch, but I ADORE the way you portrayed him in this aspect. It's so completely like him to think he might have a measure of control over Naruto that he never had. The fact that Naruto knows this too and simply plays along is just... Damn. I love it. It's so evil. Yup, not a fan of the love dove SasuNaru, but I really eat up any onesided SasuNaru Sasuke torture/angst no comfort. Sasuke should pine for Naruto, love him, and SUFFER. And he surely seems to do most of that in this fic. The ending with him alone and in anguish while Naruto listens in really ties it up a neat little package for me. I would LOVE to see a sequel where Naruto turns the tables on Sasuke and shows him who's REALLY the strong one of the two. Let Naruto be the seme screwing him till it hurts. (Yes, I can be a really sick person sometimes) Lovely, delectable. Will rec this fic to my friends.
person Suki
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Different. Interesting. I can't wait to see where you take this.
person AmuseMe
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, just as I start thinking that I'm getting bored with the Naruto fandom (the anime/manga isn't helping at the moment) I stumble upon stories like these that totally fuel my need for SasuNaru angst. Short, sweet and utterly sadistic. Naruto's charade and Sasuke's anguish is absolutely delicious. Loved it!