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for Diplomatic Relations

by Maldoror

person shinigamigrl
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hooray!!! Another new chapter. I love this story!!! Whenever I see that it has been updated I get all giddy inside and I feel like doing a little dance. Of course this chapter was awesome...all of them are and I can't wait for the next part. My favorite part of the chapter was when Gaara gave Lee the bag of dates...don't think that's what Lee meant, but it's close enough. Gaara is so cute and naive sometimes ^.^ Keep writing and I want to see what happens next in this awesome story. -.^
person Berylia
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story will never cease to marvel me.
First you are one of the things I wait for all week-end, I end up my day at work and think: "God, it's finally the week's end and I'm gone read a new chapter of DR!" And i just feel so thrilled.
And your words are just wonderful, I love the way you refer to their lovemaking: "things had gotten breathless and strange and sticky once more." It describes with such perfection the feelings between those two: breathlesse, strange and sticky...
I was howling with laughter with the confusion about the dates... That was just sooo Gaara.
I really look forward to next chapter.
Thanks.
person lalalalala
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaay update.... Though not much happened... Just wanted to review to let you know that I enjoy your story.
person Courtney
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter I'm absolutly in love with your fic, and please take your time with the next chapter ^^ don't rush yourself.

-<3Courtney
person Kagaya
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was disturbing.
person DeadUchiha
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I just got done with chapter 3. I really like this story! Your characterizations are very very good! I like your story telling and you write action scenes well too! And there is no rush to the sex (which i am not in a rush to see anyway *shiver* XP) I really enjoy stories that are written for the sake of the story and not just an excuse for characters to have sex XP so in that regard you are awesome! XD Very well rounded so far! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it! Good job!
person yuikoshiro
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaaha. I like the way you wrote this, everybody's very in character! You captured their personalities well and I'm enthralled. Lee is such a wonderful guy. He's perfect boyfriend/friend material, and Gaara's madness is wonderfully deep. (I always had weaknesses for fucked-up characters like him) Though I have to say the sex part kind of frizzled up my brains. Thy mind couldn't accept the mental images. ;_; But it's ok. My weak mentality will in no way derail your prowess. :D
person DeadUchiha
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, i just read the first chapter and i have to say i really like it so far! XD I mostly prefer to read one-shots or completed stories (can't remember if this is completed or not XP), but for some reason this one caught my eye. I really like the Lee/Gaara aspect, though this is actually the first one I've read. You've done well with Lee! He's such a cool character! I love him! XD Rock-sama...heh! That made me chuckle! Ah, well, i guess I'll read a bit more now. Hopefully the rest is as good as this first chapter! I'm looking forward to it!
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaa~ I loved it lol. Lol. I wondered about that whole open window thing.
person RadicalArcher
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Reads Ch. 17*
*laughs her ass off and then dies from the cuteness at the end*

This side story is just marvelous! I really love the way the P.O.V. shifts to the person you would never think to view the situation from (because really, when do we ever think about the Kage's having bodyguards, since they're supposed to be the best ninja of the village? That's genius that you put that in there!).

Poor Guard Three needs a vacation (with padded walls, ha!). Great humor in this piece, I really loved it. Also, the last line was cute and was a great closer for the chapter. Great job!

I loyally await the next chapter.
~RA