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by Maldoror

person Dragon
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Get stuff, as usual! That little side-story was successfully homourous. ;) But, one little thing. Right near the end, you wrote 'Kohana' instead of 'Suna'.
~"Lookout Point 2 was the only spot in _Konoha_ from which you could get a view inside the Kazekage's bedroom, but you could never be too careful or too discreet (or too thoughtful about your ANBU bodyguard's peace of mind)."~
Hurray for the wonderful, little mistakes, right? lol
person EscagirlUK
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They finally have sex. Awww. They're so cute together! Darn you for making me like this pairing.
person rhynny
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again....WE LOVE U *giant homoungously titanic GLOMP*!!! thank you for that wonderful wonderful sidestory. i have to saY this, u are one of the most articulate and prolific writers anywhere in any fandom. this is ranked as one of the best sidestories ever and the best story... thank you thank you for not listening and going ahead and sharing this with us...we love u for it... the characterisation of the nameless guardians are superb, absolutely bril! looking forward for the next installment!

*gives Goddess a handmade Teddy bear with much love and encouragement*
person Vox
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. I love the humor in your stories... I'm gonna try and write a fan-fanfic for this story sometime. We'll see how that goes.
person Camui
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bah. I have to tell you that I'm like, one of your biggest fans and I love all of your writing. You're my idol ^^ I've been following this story for a while now, and I'm finally leaving a review.

You have no idea how good you are at deciphering just what makes Lee and Gaara tick. I used to not be fond of Lee/Anyone until I read this fic; you portrayed him so perfectly. Most other Lee/Someone ficlets are OOC and they basically parody Lee, but you get him right down to the core. Same with Gaara. He's not just a sadistic, twisted soul. You depict them both perfectly. Is your real name by any chance Masashi Kishimoto?

Anyway, I love how this story is going, and it's going onto my "reccommended reading" list. You are a wonderful author, Mal, and I really admire you.

**Camui**
person oOKeairaOo
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*amused* Oh, I love you for this. I honestly don't know what else to say.
person Sam
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic side-story, it fits very well with the rest of D.R.

I must say, I wouldn't mind being one of those ANBU..
person Berylia
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have howled with laughter! It was so funny!
Poor little Three.
I love the way you resolved your problem, how can a relationship be a secret in a village full of ninjas.
Thank you.
person Cho-sa
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaa, I didn't even think of that. Brillient! Absolutely lovely. I can't believe you! ***kisses the ground you walk on***

You're amazing. I love the little side story. You just added more depth into this whole relationship thing between the two men and it's stunning! Great job and hurry with the next update!
person JitkaJaylor
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Yes, the Shinobi of the Sand were certainly the most resourceful and adaptable of all the Hidden Village ninja, and here was surely the ultimate proof."

*collapses in laughter* OMG! That was wonderful! I love DR, and this random extra about Gaara's poor bodyguards was absolutely perfect! *snickers* Poor Three. Will we be seeing these guys again? Like tiny Lee flashes of people keeping Temari and Gaara's aide away? Oh, Goddess, this was a great way to end a day.

~JJ~