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for Diplomatic Relations

by Maldoror

person khielira
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cracks up laughing* poor THREE. *laughs some more* this was great! I loved 16! It's a shame Gaara didn't know how relaxing sex was. 'cause when I thought about I can just picture a younger Gaara just after a bout of mind blowing sex that his sister Temari should walk in armed for battle!! *cracks up, again* Write and post more soon, 'cause I can wait!!
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"You think a tiring, sweaty, dangerous activity will cheer me up."

"It always cheers me up," Lee pointed out.


Loved that line. And Second. "Do you shave?"

So friggin awesome lol. I laughed pretty hard. I didn't think he'd actually ask that.

Great chapter. So...lemon-limey. I loved it all. well worh the wait!
person Cho-sa
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'waaaaaaaaaaa.... this was so cool. LOL, i loved it. Great job and I still love what your doing with your two characters Keep it up. I"m really excited and breathlessly holding out for the next chapters!
person Squeak
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My, that was hot. And so /them/. Once again, love to you for writing these two so very believably. ^_^
person Berylia
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!
Really I'm enthralled by this chapter. It is like your all story, both funny, hot, serious and above all incredibly breath-taking.
Congratulations for such a wonderful chapter and congratulations to Lee and Gaara for their first time.
May your quill run as fast as wind to bring us next chapter.
Thank you.
person Kiwa
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think it was possible, but you got me hocked on GaaraxLee! You are truly a genious and I do worship you!! And this lemon was one of the most realistic ones I have ever read and sitll managed to come out extremely...well cute is the only way I can phrase is, cute in a really weird way!! Wow is all I have to say!!!
person eyes0nme19
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter!!! Keep it up...
person Vox
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. So funny/angsty/hot/weird. Please update soon again.
person Courtney
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thats was an Awsome chapter, I loved the way you described Gaara's personality during the sex scene your writing seems to fit him perfectly, you are the first person I have ever met that could do such a thing with him!!!

Thank you for the chapter btw, I was waiting all those weeks for it XD i'm so glad it came out awsome!!!
Hope you update soon!!!!
-<3 Courtney
person RadicalArcher
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*reads Chapter 16*
*blinks repeatedly*
*re-reads Chapter 16*
*makes a batch of chocolate chip cookies (mmm, home-made cookies!), goes to Maldoror's house, presents said cookies, and proceeds to glomp Maldoror*
This chapter was incredible, and rocked my socks off. The interaction between Lee & Gaara just keeps getting better and better, and I think that anybody who can make a fic between these two this believable (that I wish it was canon for their older years) deserves a reward (and I'm not just talking about the cookies, even though I make an irresistible batch o' cookies ^_~).

All hail Maldoror, the glorious fanfic writer!!
*bows*

I'll wait for the next installment as patiently as I am able,
~RA
"If I can't dance, it's not my revolution!" - Emma Goldman