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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was very good. Sometimes I skip romancey parts, but I couldn't stop reading! It's so well-written and you've got the characters down perfectly. Lee's honesty and confusion, Gaara's angst and forewardness...great job!
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude...I still love this...
But I have to say...
Where in the HELL did chapter 13 go!?!?! It was here...then the next day (yeah...I check EVERYDAY for updates...even reread chapters sometimes!! LOVE IT SO MUCH!) But yeah...it's gone? I feel so alone. I'm glad I read it when I did.
IT WAS SO GOOOOOOOOD! I loved Gaara's reaction and his ACTION taken towards Gaara...It was awesome in every way!
Keep it up.
You are Fanfiction GOD!!!
But I have to say...
Where in the HELL did chapter 13 go!?!?! It was here...then the next day (yeah...I check EVERYDAY for updates...even reread chapters sometimes!! LOVE IT SO MUCH!) But yeah...it's gone? I feel so alone. I'm glad I read it when I did.
IT WAS SO GOOOOOOOOD! I loved Gaara's reaction and his ACTION taken towards Gaara...It was awesome in every way!
Keep it up.
You are Fanfiction GOD!!!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more of I try to mentally kill you....jk, just fucking with you. But in all honesty this was good shit and I will be patiently waiting for the rest....well probably no patiently, but waiting none the less. ^_^
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe today is your 2 year anniversary of joining AFF.net :O so umm...happy anniversary x3 lol sorry i just noticed and thought i should say something <_< (not trying to spam i swear><;) lol um..and i reviewed already, but yea good job ^^; *runs away* i'm sorry!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You won't rememver me but thats fine, but what's really funny is the reason why I enjoyed this story so much...
It's because Maldoror wrote it. >_<# I never look at Author names...
You are hands down my favorite writer, geez and I didn't even notice... Though it WOULD explain why I was thinking about Freeport so much these last few days, I need to go catch up on that too, even if I didn't notice my collective conscious must have. It's great you like Naruto I must go hunt down your other Naruto stories too now.
I'd give you a real review but that would just be more ass-kissing and some peon worship, lets not go down that road...
Love your Gaara!
It's because Maldoror wrote it. >_<# I never look at Author names...
You are hands down my favorite writer, geez and I didn't even notice... Though it WOULD explain why I was thinking about Freeport so much these last few days, I need to go catch up on that too, even if I didn't notice my collective conscious must have. It's great you like Naruto I must go hunt down your other Naruto stories too now.
I'd give you a real review but that would just be more ass-kissing and some peon worship, lets not go down that road...
Love your Gaara!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG AFF cut off my review! Bastards...
I said ...because Maldoror wrote it and she's my favorite author.
I never look at author names, jeez no wonder I've been thinking of Freeport so damn much these last few days. I may not have realized who wrote this but my collective concious did.
I'd give you a real review but that would be much ass-kissing and peon worship... let us not go down that road.
I love your Gaara!
I said ...because Maldoror wrote it and she's my favorite author.
I never look at author names, jeez no wonder I've been thinking of Freeport so damn much these last few days. I may not have realized who wrote this but my collective concious did.
I'd give you a real review but that would be much ass-kissing and peon worship... let us not go down that road.
I love your Gaara!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've never waited with such anxiety for a new chapter. Well, you're the first author I know who writes on such a regular basis and all my week-end was spent seeing if you had updated yet...
And was it worth the wait! This chapter was very dramatic and just kept playing with my heart. Your story has taken a big new step! Now romance is clearly coming, but your humourous writing never ceased and I loved it.
There is a paragraph I dearly loved:
"Lee had never thought his first kiss would occur in the midst of a small sandstorm and with a wonderful, strong, tortured young man who's more psychotic personality was probably gearing up to kill him. Being in love with Gaara was bound to make his life more interesting. And possibly rather short as well."
It's funny and yet so cute... I love it.
I also loved how Lee informed Gaara of his love, without really wanting it, letting himself be submerged by emotion. That was just so Lee.
Well, see you next week.
And was it worth the wait! This chapter was very dramatic and just kept playing with my heart. Your story has taken a big new step! Now romance is clearly coming, but your humourous writing never ceased and I loved it.
There is a paragraph I dearly loved:
"Lee had never thought his first kiss would occur in the midst of a small sandstorm and with a wonderful, strong, tortured young man who's more psychotic personality was probably gearing up to kill him. Being in love with Gaara was bound to make his life more interesting. And possibly rather short as well."
It's funny and yet so cute... I love it.
I also loved how Lee informed Gaara of his love, without really wanting it, letting himself be submerged by emotion. That was just so Lee.
Well, see you next week.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter. It was by far the most exciting^_^ Kudos to you for writing a terrific chapter and a beautiful scene. All of your Crazy-Gaara's and Gaara amidst sand and dah desert are so well written. Love this story so much. Can't wait for more!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, I am amazed! This chapter was really beautiful! I was able to get wonderful mental pictures, and there was just so much emotion and it was just so...so *sniff* wonderful! :') I can't wait for the next chapter! <3
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeay!
I can't help being so happy to read this chapter! Damaged pretty boys and the ninja that love them is so satisfying. You do write so well, especialy couples that are "off the wall."
Gaara is so heartbreaking I just want to cuddle him, but I'm not as brave as Lee... ^_^;
I can't help being so happy to read this chapter! Damaged pretty boys and the ninja that love them is so satisfying. You do write so well, especialy couples that are "off the wall."
Gaara is so heartbreaking I just want to cuddle him, but I'm not as brave as Lee... ^_^;