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*reads Chapter 12*
*melts into fan-girl puddle of joy at the end of the chapter*

Five words to describe what I feel right now: You Rock My Face Off

This is so well done and the characterizations are so good and the dialogue is awesome and I'm babbling like the fan-girl I am only after I'm hyped up on sugar and alcohol and I've had NEITHER yet tonight. Good job on breaking my inner uber-fan-girl out of the mental closet I lock her in with just your FREAKING MARVELOUS WRITING.

Feel the love...and I am going to try to wait patiently until the next update, but no promises.
~RA
"If I can't dance, it's not my revolution!" - Emma Goldman

wow..love this chapter...!!!

Damn that was good. Highly emotional. >_> I wonder if you do comission fics lol. I can draw some Lee/Gaara stuff for ya in return lol.
Hehe well I'm glad it's out in the open now and that There's a hop foward in their relatiobship sorta.

Wow. I still can't get over how well you wrote this. I am left stunned speechless after reading these two chapters. Their relationship is just so... utterly undescribable. Well, excellent job on these late two chapters. I love your characters and their interactions. I can't wait to see what happens next so update soon!

where's the update? ;;

"It was still the most exciting chapter to write yet, along with the one coming after it"..... just when I was content to paitiently wait for the next chapter you had to put that one in there *sniffles and points* I HATE YOU.....Wow that chapter had me at the edge of my seat all the emotions and stuff swirlin around along with all that sand I loved Gaara's reaction...having him just kiss Lee back and be all fluffy would have been too easy and so out of character *sigh* I'll prob reread the story every other day till you update (like I've been doin) *gives big hug* Bless ye child Bless ye!

Still without a way to adequately describe how much I love this story (love it!) and how well you write the two of them. I've started looking forward to the new chapter every weekend. It's almost like rationing a book to make it last as long as possible. ;)

Holy crap!!! Chapter 12 was the greatest!!! I've gotten my friend into the Lee/Gaara pairing because of this fanfiction. The emotions/conflicts/history all combined in this chapter were very well written. This chapter was truly one of the best written fanfictions I have have ever read! ^_^ This rocks! I love it! I can't wait until the next chapter!

OMG that was the best chapter so far. The decription, the emotion, the KISS!!!!! Go Lee!!! I can't wait for more. Write some more!!! ^.^ Hooray GaaraxLee!!!!! I think I'm going to read that chapter again.

Shinigamigrl07

That was a chapter worth waiting for. Wow. You could not have written that scene any better if you were Kishimoto-san himself. I am very humbled at your characterizations of Lee and Gaara. I don't know if anyone could have made Gaara's reaction any more authentic than you could.

This made me ache for Gaara even more than I already do. I have a hard time imagining the mental roadblocks he must have in his mind pertaining to love, friendship and pain, and you laid them out for me. I'm in the library at my college right now, taking a break from writing a research essay, and as I read this chapter (which I had very eagerly anticipated), I almost broke out in tears. I, like Lee, wanted nothing more than to be near him and support him as he took down a few of those blocks.

Incredible. You are incredible. Please, keep working on this fic with all of your power and artistry, because this is fast becoming something truly stunning.

WS