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Wow! This is getting very good! I like to see what happens between Lee and Gaara!
Please keeping writing! ^___^

Oooh! Wow, suspence! Will Gaara be okay? What's that snake-bastard want Gaara for?! Update soon, please!

Do you know how awesome your writing is? I don't think I've ever seen Lee portrayed quite this accurately. I know I've left a review in a similar vein, but I just reread your story and I can't get over how incredible it is to see what is orginally a two-dimensional character fleshed out so subtly and completely that it just takes my breath away.

When I saw that you had never written anything for Lee before, I had to take a step back and declare an incredulous "what the hell?!" I mean, are you sure you've never written him before? Had you said nothing about your experience writing him, I could have believed that you had been writing him from the beginning of the manga, or for a really long time. Your reasons for him doing things are flawless.

...I should also mention, as an aside, that I find Lee oddly attractive, and the way you've written his clothing at times (or lack of) has me drooling. Gaara is something special too (finally caught myself up in the manga), and the images you evoke in my mind of the two of them together almost have me collapsing in nosebleeds. Gaara licking the water from Lee's chin...let us just say that after I read that, I needed a cold shower, and technically nothing happened.

I really admire your style. I hope you continue to amaze me, and on this note, I will end this review; you're now on my recommended reading list.

WS

Update Update Update Update UPDATE!! lol I really REALLY love this story so far and can't wait to see where it goes next :D Please update soon, and I will be sure to read... ;)

Reveiw of Chapter.....ummm 11:

Ai...so you want help a? Well then eat reveiw! BWAHAHAHHAHA!
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*cough*
Anywho yay Lee is happy...but even more yay..GAI---LEE----GAI---LEEE!! XD Ahh those two's interactions just leave me happy and full of smiles. :)
Yep glad you updated...was begining to worry that aff went down for a few days there...but yay its back and you updated WOOT!
I really enjoy your writing, hopefully you'll be able to get this one out before your inspiration bunnies run away (*cough*.. source of all things *cough*).
I wish you the best of luck, I'll be waiting on the sideline for the next chapter...toodles!

~alisha

get on with it already! ok! who want to start making bets who jumps the others bones first? Gaara or Lee? step right up dont be shy. I dont think the writter herslef knowns whats gonna happen! It can go either way folks, place your bets!
is Gaara gonna be mad with Lee now?

Princess: ::clears throat::

Um...you're really very good. This is well-written, well plotted, and the characters are spot-on. I'm glad it's growing, since I love high-quality long plotty stories. ::blushes:: I really look forward to reading the rest. Thank you; thank you very much.

Inner Princess says: "Hee! 22 chapters!! ::chants:: More! More! More! More! More! I love this! It's Lee-tastic! It's Gaara-rific! It'sall that, AND a bag o' chips, baby! Now, bring on the smut - we're all a-quiver over here!! NC-17, BABY!!! WHOO-HOOO!!!!

still as good as ever, so 22 chapter, you do not se me complain.
this chapter was a chapter fulled with feeling (me like). sadly only from Leis point of view, but that is because I really want to know Gaaras feeligs... if there are any. since you write this story form Lei, promise me you will write it so I can find out Gaaras feeling too...
please update soon, you are doing a great job

Yessssss! Chapter eleven is up! I'm so happy!
It was just too cute when Lee discovered that it was love that pushed him to fight and to protect his most important person! And I love the fact that Gai read it in his eyes!
Thank you, I'll be waiting for next chapter.

Hacha I hope Gaara is up and at it next chappie. Yoshi Lee has declared his love for Gaara to himself now he needs to say it to Gaara LOL.
well update soon

LOves Arry