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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reveiw Of Chapter 20:
Woot woot another chapter!!! Much rejoicing!!!
Oooo I sooo love Lee such a selfless person whom I just die for(granted he wouldn't let anyone die for him....but still)! I hope Lee gets some happiness from Gaara for all his efforts! *goes all mushy inside* Gawd I love how you protray them both...so true to character! XD
Not sure what else to say beside that I cannot wait for the next update!
~alisha
Woot woot another chapter!!! Much rejoicing!!!
Oooo I sooo love Lee such a selfless person whom I just die for(granted he wouldn't let anyone die for him....but still)! I hope Lee gets some happiness from Gaara for all his efforts! *goes all mushy inside* Gawd I love how you protray them both...so true to character! XD
Not sure what else to say beside that I cannot wait for the next update!
~alisha
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Err I ment chapter 10, but surely you'll allow it to go up to 20 no? XD
Ah well since I'm wasting a reveiw just to correct a mistake I may as well praise you some more.
You portrayed Lee's emotions sooooooooooo well and gooey mushy lovey dovey in this latest chapter! I really loved how much he cared for Gaara and that he finally in heat of battle owned up to it! *sqeals with delite* Ahh truely cannot wait for more!
Ah well since I'm wasting a reveiw just to correct a mistake I may as well praise you some more.
You portrayed Lee's emotions sooooooooooo well and gooey mushy lovey dovey in this latest chapter! I really loved how much he cared for Gaara and that he finally in heat of battle owned up to it! *sqeals with delite* Ahh truely cannot wait for more!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG. I love this so much^_^ I check it for updates all the time and, like today, stay up to 5am to read^_~ I love it so much and you write the characters SO WELL! They are so in character it's scary. Such wonderful writing! Keep it up, it's awesome!!!!!!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Diplomatic Relations! I was looking forward to next chapter and wasn't disappointed.
This chapter 8 was really well done and the way Lee fights against his feelings is really well told. Gai is really a great teacher and my heart is tight when I think of his wonderful energy!
This chapter 8 was really well done and the way Lee fights against his feelings is really well told. Gai is really a great teacher and my heart is tight when I think of his wonderful energy!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Holy Goddess! Chapter 9 was a thrill and wonderfully addictive! Drugged smiling Lee is so cute! I love this story and the new turn in the scenario is quite interesting!
Thank you so much for the story!
Thank you so much for the story!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh, I can't wait for next week-end!
It was so incredibly tense, I couldn't stop from reading.
Will Lee understand why he died inside? Argh!
It was so incredibly tense, I couldn't stop from reading.
Will Lee understand why he died inside? Argh!
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ.. you're killing meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I can't wait till next weekend.. *squirms*
I love this fic... best GaaraxLee fic evah!
I swear to GOD if you make Lee seme I'll kill you.
I can't wait till next weekend.. *squirms*
I love this fic... best GaaraxLee fic evah!
I swear to GOD if you make Lee seme I'll kill you.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*reads Chapter 10*
*blinks*
Aaawww, that was sweet, funny, and touching, all at once. I liked the "time for that ritual suicide kind of embarassing" remark, that was pretty funny. The sweet/touching part was when he realized how scared he was about Gaara dying and how he had to stop it from happening, and then the part where he thought Gaara got shanked when if fact Gaara was the one holding him down and away from the attackers. I really thought the ending, though abrupt, was appropriate for Lee's state of mind at the time. "You can pass out now" So he did. ^_^ Very cute.
Keep up the fantastic work, I really like the way you're building up their characters and deepening their relationship, instead of just having them jump in and start sucking face. For a pairing like this, I think a deepening of character understanding and a strengthening of relationship needs to happen before any yaoi-ish-ness can happen. This is a marvelous story.
~RA
"If I can't dance, it's not my revolution!" - Emma Goldman
*blinks*
Aaawww, that was sweet, funny, and touching, all at once. I liked the "time for that ritual suicide kind of embarassing" remark, that was pretty funny. The sweet/touching part was when he realized how scared he was about Gaara dying and how he had to stop it from happening, and then the part where he thought Gaara got shanked when if fact Gaara was the one holding him down and away from the attackers. I really thought the ending, though abrupt, was appropriate for Lee's state of mind at the time. "You can pass out now" So he did. ^_^ Very cute.
Keep up the fantastic work, I really like the way you're building up their characters and deepening their relationship, instead of just having them jump in and start sucking face. For a pairing like this, I think a deepening of character understanding and a strengthening of relationship needs to happen before any yaoi-ish-ness can happen. This is a marvelous story.
~RA
"If I can't dance, it's not my revolution!" - Emma Goldman
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and that would have been embarrassing. Time-for-that-ritual-suicide-ceremony, that kind of embarrassing.
I love that line.
And Lol. Poor Lee. Overdidit should be his middle name. He got a well deserved passing out ^^
I love that line.
And Lol. Poor Lee. Overdidit should be his middle name. He got a well deserved passing out ^^
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Listen here, and listen close...
I'm gonna say something I *never* say...
Ready?
This fic...
Is awsome.
I have zero complaints.
The characters are dead-on.
The style flows wonderfuly.
Honestly, I'd say you have a fair shot at being a writer professionally.
Maybe not for Naruto, specifically, since the story is probably already writen, but definitely a writer.
Go forth and write for comics, games, movies, magazines, novels...
Seriously.
Now, I don't see Lee or Gaara being gay in the Naruto Manga/Anime universe as we know it...
But then again, all fan-fiction by it's nature is an alternate-reality, yes?
And beleive me, the universe you've created here holds a singular, important factor that most fics lack...
It's *believable*...
Remember:
As long as a reader can believe what you write, you've done your job!
Great-big Victory Muffins for you!
P.S.
Please, for the love of The Great Whatever, *DON'T* stop writing this fic (without finishing...).
It's one of the only good fics I've found, and I'm really enjoying reading it, so keep up the magnificent work!
Cheers!
Vitaralastla
I'm gonna say something I *never* say...
Ready?
This fic...
Is awsome.
I have zero complaints.
The characters are dead-on.
The style flows wonderfuly.
Honestly, I'd say you have a fair shot at being a writer professionally.
Maybe not for Naruto, specifically, since the story is probably already writen, but definitely a writer.
Go forth and write for comics, games, movies, magazines, novels...
Seriously.
Now, I don't see Lee or Gaara being gay in the Naruto Manga/Anime universe as we know it...
But then again, all fan-fiction by it's nature is an alternate-reality, yes?
And beleive me, the universe you've created here holds a singular, important factor that most fics lack...
It's *believable*...
Remember:
As long as a reader can believe what you write, you've done your job!
Great-big Victory Muffins for you!
P.S.
Please, for the love of The Great Whatever, *DON'T* stop writing this fic (without finishing...).
It's one of the only good fics I've found, and I'm really enjoying reading it, so keep up the magnificent work!
Cheers!
Vitaralastla