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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait till the next chapter comes out~~ i'm so happy with chapter 9. ^^ i wonder how much Gaara actually knows about sex? I guess Lee will know much much more about it, so I'm hoping Lee goes on top!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's totally innocent?? Somehow I don't believe that Gaara would lick Sanada's face to get water.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*reads Chapters 8 & 9*
*snickers over Chapter 8*
*gawks at Chapter 9*
Wow. Four words: Love it, love you.
I love the way you did Lee's POV while he was under the influence of the pain meds, and the whole conserving water bit with Gaara was priceless. The way the chapter ended made me go "Aaww, that's kinda sweet" *laughs*
Keep this going, please, it's the only really spectacular LxG fic I've seen so far, and you do marvelous work.
~RA
"If I can't dance, it's not my revolution!" - Emma Goldman
*snickers over Chapter 8*
*gawks at Chapter 9*
Wow. Four words: Love it, love you.
I love the way you did Lee's POV while he was under the influence of the pain meds, and the whole conserving water bit with Gaara was priceless. The way the chapter ended made me go "Aaww, that's kinda sweet" *laughs*
Keep this going, please, it's the only really spectacular LxG fic I've seen so far, and you do marvelous work.
~RA
"If I can't dance, it's not my revolution!" - Emma Goldman
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo nice update. So in depth lol. I can't think of anything else to add.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can so picture lee in my head coming out of that fight all bloody and out of his mind then turning around and making off with garrad slung over his shoulder as all of bloody hell were chasing them, the rest of the group just rying to keep up and in sight. and i have ta tell ya, thats pretty damn funny with a side of romatic humor.
please continue....
YAOI!!!!
please continue....
YAOI!!!!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha, cute cute cute. I like this chapter. OOOoo Gaara licks Lee, yumminess!! Well, keep it up! Can't wait to see what happens to them next!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I think that was the best chapter yet. You did a wonderful job diving into Lee's character like that, and I can see all of it happening as if it was from the manga or anime. It made me want to jump in and give him a big hug.
This is definately coming along nicely, so keep it up!
This is definately coming along nicely, so keep it up!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*nods* I believe that you handled that really well--and I can really see how that was difficult to write--it was complex and it did span a lot of ground.
Shit, I know that I've already said this--but you're *extremely* good at this stuff, you know? XD
Shit, I know that I've already said this--but you're *extremely* good at this stuff, you know? XD
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. The entire thing. Especially how it is actually taking TIME for a relationship to grow between the two. Things tend to happen far too fast in so many fics, it's depressing. This is quality stuff though. Excellent job so far, and I eagerly await future chapters. ^-^
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...
a long but interesting and well done insight into the characters of lee...
But when they gonna do it?! God, why doesnt Gaara just jump lee if the boys having so much trouble. neither one of them seem to know a whole lot of about sex and im starting to get worried.
Write damn you!!
a long but interesting and well done insight into the characters of lee...
But when they gonna do it?! God, why doesnt Gaara just jump lee if the boys having so much trouble. neither one of them seem to know a whole lot of about sex and im starting to get worried.
Write damn you!!