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for Diplomatic Relations

by Maldoror

person Dominic Shade
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even though it didn't have the orgasmic ending I was hoping for...I was still able to frolic and bask in the rays of the chapter's awesomeness. Side story? There's a side story?! Get it out now! No waiting! Why would you make me wait?! And I'm glad you liked the picts.! I have to do more now...some of Lee...yeah. Great story, I'm gonna go re-read it now.


*takes patented Gai sensei pose* Oh! What the beauty of Youth can create!!!

*weeps in a manly way with waves crashing in the background*


Well now that that's over...hurry up with the other ones you mentioned! I can't survive much longer!
person Dominic Shade
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...oops, didn't mean to double post your review thing. Just pretend the second review said something entirely different and awe inspiring.
person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i agree with lee

oh..

my...

GAWD!....

oh, and i luv 4 the rough sex. YAY!
person dragontamer
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You never disappoint me! ^o^ You are amaizing! Specially when Gaara said that he didn't mind being a lapdog for the rest of his life, as long as they are together! TT.TT Beautiful!
What about Gai-sensei? o.o; Any of Lee's friends?

Please write soon!!
Take care!
~dt.
person dragontamer
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another magnificent chapter! I have follow your fic just recently and I am charmed by your words that makes all scenarios belivable. The way you describe is autentic, the fellings, the situation, Lee's point of view, never giving up, the way his sensei might act, Gaara's charater, honesty and even innocence in certain aspects are true to a fault. I feel I can't actually put into words what I want to say, so I'll be simple, I love your fic and I will wait for more. It has become one of the few that I will remember for years to come. I know once is finish I will wait a little bit to read the whole thing and I know I will find more reasons and new details that will keep me glued to the screen.
I should wrap this up!
Well take care and please do finish this wonderful fic!
~dt
Ps. I will lurk around to check for updates!
person Xephyr
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I had just discovered it when Aff went down. Now that we're up and running again, I'm glad you updated. Now that that's been said.....Update now! Please! I'm on a hunger stike until you do! Lol, you rock!
person Fan
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is amazing! Its funny how great authors can take characters that I would normally want nothing to do with and make them so interesting. I used to think little of Lee and only started reading this story due to my Gaara obession, but am now a die hard Lee fan. He is amazingly likeable in this story and carries a lot of depth as a character. I notice that some authors make a common mistake, which is assume people know everything about the characters (due to it being fanfiction) and never bother to develop them. You, however, seem to thrive off character development.

I also love your Gaara. All his actions towards Lee make me melt into a pile of gloo. These two seemed made for each other.

And of course, this chapter was amazingly hot. I loved seeing Gaara's dominant side. Thanks a lot for such a wonderful read. I will definitly be checking back for updates.
person Elric Maxwell
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm ALWAYS on the lookout for your updates! The way you wrote about Gaara and Lee's relationship, you've made it crazy, sexy, funny, and most of all, beautiful. Damn, the way you described Gaara finally topping Lee.... *whew!* Too hot for words! I can't wait for the next chapter! ....or three! ^_^ EM
person littlebastard
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! I AM STILL READING, FOR SURE!
person Dominic Shade
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord hon. Oh hell, if you go on and post the lemon chapter that would come right after this (I need some rough semeLee damn it!), then I'll show ya somethin' pretty.

Well that sounded pervy...no, just some Gaara art....ahem...some pervy Gaara art. By me. 'cause that's how hard I rock. I love you and I love your style babe! Just rock on with your bad self.


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