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I love this story! it's wonderfully real and belivible without being slow or boring. I can't wait for the next chapter and all the ones after
so keep on writing please! LeeGaara is so cuuute, in a twisted fun kind of way ;D

Ok, you're probably tired of my ramblings.... but I've been reading chapter 13 over and over again... and I.... If I ever could be speachless it would be now. I am so amazed by all the feelings you've managed to put into this chapter. It moves me every time I read it... I just adore the way you are handling the words, how to put them into colour, into actions... I am envious. I am jealous of you. I have thought from time to time that I had some gift in writing - but you.... you're a goddess.

Hi, I'm still reading!! Woot! I think this is an amazing fic and I love Lee's and Garra's characterization. You've done an amazing job at keeping them "true". Keep up the great job!

Oh dear lord, this is easily my new favorite story. I wasn't over the top about Lee/Gaara...but after reading this...just...good God woman, lol. It's funny, sexy, and thrilling all at once. But I would have really liked to hear exactly what Gaara told Kankuro when they were first discovered. That poor guy. And the first time Gaara gave Lee a blow job, that would have been nice to see too. But...lol, I can't stop laughing, this was just too good. I've already read through it three times and I goin' for a fourth after I finish reviewing. The characterization is...beyond perfect and the story itself is believable. So, bravo to you. Oh, and I SO want Gaara to figure out what his sexy raspy voice or just his body in general does to Lee's thought process. And moaning Gaara...you need more of that. And I am just waiting so patiently for when Lee...well, spanks Gaara. A light tap is all I ask.

I have finished about half of DR and I am completely hooked. I used to get the creeps everytime I saw Lee's spastic antics, but in this fiction he is so noble and endearing (still spastic but tolerable). He is actually becoming one of my more favored characters. I must say the interactions between the characters are very believable and the situations are interesting. I love the wry humor that is inherent in Garaa and his total cluelessness as far as other human beings are concerned. Lee will eventually help him ease out of that state I am sure.
Anywho, I am throughly in love with this work. Kudos to you and I wish you many more healthy, spastic plot bunnies.

Oh, yes! I'm still reading it! I've been on the lookout for your updates for so long, I was beginning to wonder if they did lose it! This chapter was so hot, and it made really love the GaaraxLee pairing all over again! ^_^ I need to read the next chapter, but I hope you keep more coming! You've made them so adorable in their relationship! EM

Hey im still readin this story and its very good!!!!!
Thanks for still posting chapters!!!
Can't wait for the next one!!!!!!

i just read this for the first time, and ill keep reading, you just have to keep updating. lol. this is one of the best fanfictions ive ever read, and the best gaara/lee fanfiction ive ever read. congrats for your skill in writing.

^_^

*giggles maniacally* I loved chapter 21, so very funny.

You know, I can't wait for when Gaara might lose a little of his inhibitions and truly act out. You've been giving little hints with his ardent kisses and sudden passion. By the sounds of things, Lee wouldn't be against a little rougher play, if you know what I mean. And I believe that you do. *winkwinknudgenudge*

Great work, continue and update!

I had to leave a review. This really is one of the best Naruto fics that I have read within the past year. You have the characters down and you managed to develop them further in a believeble way. I like the pacing of your story and the realism. I often felt a bit cynical reading the 'typical' fanfic romances and the perfect lemons and limes. (they are good for fantasising fangirls but some of us who have experienced the real thing do wish for some realism now and again)

I also love the humour, I have had to cover my mouth after laughing out loud while reading this at night (don't want to wake up my husband!)

As I said before when I reviewed last year, I never thought of this pairing and my first thought was (just because they met and fought in canon does not mean they could have a relationship) I am glad though that I gave you and diplomatic relations a try. Now I am going to check and see what else you have written.

I hope after you complete DR you will write other stories.

Your writing style is very descriptive and comprehensive and I just want to say thanks for a good story.

My only complaint is that I wished there was more interaction with Gaara's siblings.

I hope for another of those 'other' POVs because your chapter 17 was hilarious ie the side story.

wow, this is the longest review I have ever written. I also like what little of your personality that has come through in your ANs, (I really haTe attention seeking and whining fanfic authors).

BTW I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!