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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful *wipes away tears* so goddamn fluffy. I love this story.
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oops. My previous comment made no sense. That is, thanks for updating so quickly. ^-^
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally, after two weeks of anxiously going everyday to my computer to see if next chapter is tere I get what I was waiting for! And on the first day of my holiday! And it's a lemony chapter! It's just too good to be true.
Just the first few lines made me die in laughter. The wonderfully romantic setting of Lee's dream and Gaara's plain "Let's try anal sex"! Just magnificient!
It's cute how Gaara kisses Lee shortly after going away on the rooftop.
Oh my! Oh my! They are arguing on who is going to be bottom! They're too much!
Whoaw! I've just finished reading and my smile is just as wide as a bridge. It was so cute and loving and at the same time so akward because it was their first time and they wanted to get it right... I'm all candy right now because of it.
I love this chapter and it was really worth the anguish and the wait.
Just the first few lines made me die in laughter. The wonderfully romantic setting of Lee's dream and Gaara's plain "Let's try anal sex"! Just magnificient!
It's cute how Gaara kisses Lee shortly after going away on the rooftop.
Oh my! Oh my! They are arguing on who is going to be bottom! They're too much!
Whoaw! I've just finished reading and my smile is just as wide as a bridge. It was so cute and loving and at the same time so akward because it was their first time and they wanted to get it right... I'm all candy right now because of it.
I love this chapter and it was really worth the anguish and the wait.
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I love Gaara and Lee. You make them make sense, I hope you understood that. I am really enjoying this, you are on my favorites list. Can I suggest something. Another interlude with our poor ANBUish protectors. I can see some serious damage to their psyches after this. Maybe some heavy alcohol, or whatever. Its great. Keep it up.
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man! i've been following this story and i have to say i absolutely love it! I mean i love a good smutty story every now and then, but i really love stories that have plots. I've read all your stories and have to say that i like the odd pairings of Gai/Kakashi and Gaara/Lee! You're writing is beautiful and your accuracy on the characters make your story even better! Can't wait for your next chapter! Ganbare! ^^
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. Sex IS akward and considering the type of messed up people we're dealing with, this is the only "normal" way for it to happen. I'm very impressed. Keep up the good work! The fact that what you write is different is meerly a statement on your talent.
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was SO awesome! I can't wait for more! Akward!Sex was so rockin'! It's a new approach and in doing so you've made the characters even more real than you have so far!!
This is WONDERFUL!
Can't wait for more^_~
This is WONDERFUL!
Can't wait for more^_~
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Reads Ch. 19*
The way you write Gaara is completely believable, and the fact that he is so blunt is what makes hims o open to humor. Lee's formalness just lends to the possibilities, because when one gets embarrassed over damn near everything sex-wise, and the other doesn't know how to be embarrassed, funny funny damn near hilarious things happen...like this chapter.
Forget normal sex; I liked/loved/will read again the sex that happened in this chapter with much enjoyment. The way you write sex scenes is a credit to the lemon category. However, if you were to write what you refer to as "normal" sex in later chapters, I will be reading that too. ^_~
This update made my week.
~RA
The way you write Gaara is completely believable, and the fact that he is so blunt is what makes hims o open to humor. Lee's formalness just lends to the possibilities, because when one gets embarrassed over damn near everything sex-wise, and the other doesn't know how to be embarrassed, funny funny damn near hilarious things happen...like this chapter.
Forget normal sex; I liked/loved/will read again the sex that happened in this chapter with much enjoyment. The way you write sex scenes is a credit to the lemon category. However, if you were to write what you refer to as "normal" sex in later chapters, I will be reading that too. ^_~
This update made my week.
~RA
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good. I was glued to all 19 chapters. I coulden't believe how good and well written this story was. I felt a lot of emotions. You made Gaara and Rock Lee's relationship believable. I think also the side story was a good idea. I sometimes want to know what the other people are thinking. I hope to be reading more chapters soon. Please keep up the good work.