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I must say that lately I have become very jaded toward lemons. It seems like there all the same and they just don't keep my attention. But I find the sex in this story to be just akward and clumsy enough to be both delightfully riviting and sweetley endearing. Your approach to the whole thing the way you capture the charactures so pefectley it really give me hope and renews my fath in fanfiction. Sence I begain reading your story I have once again begain to search for new ones and while most are still the same and not nearly as captivating as your work. There is still hope that I will someday stumble across another little gem like this. thank you .

Ah, man, that was the best chapter yet. That was entirely hot *whew* I love Lee having to give up those romance-novel ideas of what a relationship is like, it's rather funny; but he handles it with his usual mix of stubbornness, enthusiasm, and geniuine good nature. They're unconventional but very sweet (yes, even Gaara was WAFFy... or what passes for it with him ;)

Yay! And..ZOMg...I actually snorted at the begining with Gaara's question. That was just so funny. And yay it actually seemed like how a guy's first time would be if you don't know about the mechanics. Awesome chapter. I laughed so hard, but it also had it's sweet moments. Perfectly done chapter. ^^

>_> and at the end you said end of part 18..this is 19 ^^.

I can't wait till your next update. And oo I see they got curtains lol. Oh man. I am looking foward to when Temari, Kankuro and the Naruto bunch find out about it lol.

When I saw that you had updated i was literally in tears. Two weeks without an update is a long time especially with a story as good as this. Now when I read the chapter I was extremely giddy inside and I couldn't stop saying "I love this story" Finally Gaara and Lee have reached a new high in their relationship and I see lots of sex in the near future. Those two now that they have discovered the joy of sex will probably be shagging like there was no tomorrow...at least in my mind ^.^ Actually I hope you write about how like someboy finds them *Temari* and their reaction that should be very interesting. Oh well it's your story and all I can do is write revies like this as i grovel at your feet. ^.~ Can't wait for the next update which I hope will be next week.

Your humble fan
Shinigamigrl

Okay... 1) YAY FOR UPDATE! 2) FINALLY! I've been waiting FOREVER for this! I must say, I thought it was "perfect"...exactly what Lee would think and do *sigh!* Wonderfulness! Can't wait to read more! Great job!

Okay, I hardly review anything (honestly. I just don't) but dude, this story is amazing. I've kept it bookmarked for weeks on end and searched for new chapters, and I love it all!! It took me a very long time to get through it all, and then I was thrilled to find this one. Loved their first time - very realistic considering this is Gaara and Lee we're talking about. I have absolutely no concrit to give to you...half of me wishes I did, the other half is like "THAT'S A GOOD THING!!" So, wondrous job - I hope for another chapter next week! ^.~

Thats was a very hot chapter, you definatly succseeded in making it hilariously akward XD I hope to see you next chapter soon ^^

"Let's try anal sex"
Oh Gaara, you're so subtle.

*looks to see DR has been updated for the 1000 time this week* Must have been messy for you in RL if you haven't updated yet.
So you have my sympathies *pats*
Ja ne! * goes off to watch spongebob; 'I'm ready...depression...'* =)

*reads ch.18*
Oh...no...you...didn't!!

The dates...dear gods, THE DATES!!! I actually had to stop reading so I could laugh, and then I had to get a tissue because I was laughing so hard by that point that I was crying (woot for happy tears!)!!. This is great, and sweet/sappy/lovely/. ^_~

I cannot wait to read chapter 19...but I must!
Also, I realize you put ch. 18 in last week, but last week was nuts and there was no way for me to spare the time to read any fanfic...so this review is really late. Gomen!

~RA