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for Big Heart, Drunken Fist

by Maldoror

person Bakura
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've got 500 Hits! Congrates! :}!
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaa! That was so damn cute!
person Alisha
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM

XDXDXD
YAY!
4 ficies of yours in one sitting now! WOOT!! *sigh* too bad I have to wait now for others to get updated...anywho...
This one made me laugh alot, and get the warm "awww" fuzzy feeling. ^^
"I should knock both their heads together, but they probably wouldn't even feel it."---So true it hurts to think about sometimes...LOL
Really good one-shot.....too bad no smexy, but its great how it is....
This one just screams "Aww" so much! ^^
Anohter great story from you...more praise when you update ne?
Until the next fiction!
~alisha
person Archeeka
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
......*snorts!*

Again, smooth reading from you. Well, smooth reading at the parts when I didn't have to rise out of my chair from laughter, but smooth nonetheless! :D

I really enjoyed this--you really inhance the tension between characters, you know that? I mean, for example, of COURSE I knew that if Lee, considering his character, had even *said* any of those things that he did to Gaara in this story, he would indeed, be mortified. However, the way that *you* wrote the context made my face flush so horribly that I actually couldn't read for a while.

I recovered, though. :D

I REALLY enjoyed this. Your voice, your style, the characterization, the tension, the quirks, all splendid. I wouldn't mistake your works for anyone elses.
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. I don't really support the Gaara/Lee pairing myself, but you write it so well.
person Bakura
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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It was one of the most great fics I have ever read.
it was funny, the charcthers were IC, (except "I was so worried", i think Gaara would just say "I was worried")
and it was GAARA LEE.

briliant work ^^
please write more one shots like this.
person mikumi
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"I’m not going to be 'mean' to him. I just want to talk to him."

"I can be here for that."

"Then we might want to have sex."

"I’m out of here."

that my friend, is totally priceless...XD
lovin your lee/gaara ficcies!! keep it up!! ^^
person ^^
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so cute. Really. ^^ I'm not usually one for LeeGaara, but this was... so sweet! *squee* And Naruto was funny. I loved that part where Gaara went, "You have the Kyuubi, you'll live." "Thanks!" OMG THE SARCASM. XD; Awesome!
person Cho
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! That was just great! I love Gaara and Lee ogether and you just did a wonderful job! I think you did wonder with Lee and Gaara's characters along with Naruto. It's not often that you stumble upon a good GaaraLee fic but wow. You've blown me away with this. I love it and only wish that you'd prolong it or something. Maybe a little into something like how they hooked up. By the by, how DID they hook up?

Well other then that, I am glad I read your story. I look forward to exploring more of your work !!
person Oboro
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wah, that was sooo cool! I've never really read a Gaara x Lee fic before, but I found I really liked it! Everyone was perfectly in character, and I was chuckling the whole time at how Lee was acting and the way Naruto was laughing at the whole thing. Very cute, very well done. Great job!! ^_^