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for The birthday suit

by Trollmia

person animeprincess_9387
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG i loved this story!!! my mouth dropped n hit my key board when i found out that naruto had pretended to be sasuke!!!
lol <--- and i actually did laugh out loud! i also like the lovey dovey stuff too. n i would have had no idea that english wasnt ur first language if u didnt say so, u are better with words than i am. thanx for a great story, n dont forget to keep writing, cuz i'll keep reading! <3
person Estrella
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a great story! the thing i didn't expect was uke Sasuke!
It really doesn't matter to me anyways, i don't care who's in which position in Narusasu, just as long as they do it!
the WAFFY parts were a little weird, bue WAFF isn't my thing, so i'm not flaming.
I'm just here for the smut.
GREAT STORY!!!!
person Rosebud
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Very HOT!!!!
person Katie //.~
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The kids call Naruto "The Boss?!" *squeals* I adore the ending, & what Naruto did to teach Sasuke to never prank a prankster!
person Kawaii!
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The NaruSasu surprised me, but it was still cute!
person AWESOME!
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I luff all ur ficcies!
person Yuri-san
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh? English isn't? Well, bravo then! I know people who only speak english and their's is far, far worse than yours is.
0_0 Sasuke bottoming himself was completely unexpected! What a good birthday present! ^_^;
Somehow, this fic seems faster-paced than your other ones.
person Kayo
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Wonderful lemon involving crossdressing! NAruto's prank was a very nice touch. GREAT JOB AS ALWAYS
person Mija
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmm tis this not an older story?? could of sworn Ive read it afore..maybe on FFNet or on the SasuxNaru LJ site?? I know Ive read like loads of your work Trollmia and you know I love them all so I read this one and found out I already read it, not that I didnt reread it again hehe, gots to love a good SasuNaru nummy smex ficlet lol, and btw in case you have not been told or have see it, I wanted to let you know about this new site a few really great authors I admire from my KakaIru site made so that there would be all sorts of Naruto stories, het, yuri, yaoi, threesome and what not, I was told to let some of my fave authors know about it in case they are intrested in it..soo I wanted to tell you cause I lurve all your fics, the only thing is that its only for R to NC-17 stuff and they hold a contest every few months and the prizes are cool, a year paid LJ account or GF for Amazon..dunno if your intrested but I wanted to let you know about it, even if you dont want to become a member you can go read some really great fics Im a enjoyed having just one place to go when I want my Naruto fix lol, although I still frequent all the sites, but I LOVE the fact that it has various pairings..even incest if you are into the Sand sibbling thing or Hina/Neji thing, I actually read my first few fics on those subjects and I found the writting very well done..ok ok done babbling anyhow if you are intrested look for Shinobi_Sex or email for the link k??? again loved reading this again, was nice, always love to reread a favorite fic now and again, huggles and smiles Mija...:=-)
person sylvir
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Anything with a uke Sasuke is a good thing. For english not being your first language you do better then a lot of people who have english as a first language. I can't wait to read more of your work. :)