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for The birthday suit

by Trollmia

person someone
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
would've been hotter if it was sasunaru...
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very, very nice... ^.^ I approve of the surprising way things happened. I would have thought naruto to be the uke... though you certainly messed around with my head with the master serving the servant girl thing... nyan! Lovely!

No... I couldnt tell your first language wasn't english... your images are very good, so it doesnt bother... english is not my first language either... and I am also 33. Yay! for free thinking yaoi naruto loving adults!!!!
person LucifersAngel41
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
check your email for my reveiw :D
person sweettormentedangel
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great story. You are one fantastic writer. And you do yaoi soooo good! Keep up the great work!
person yay sex
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to say this is one of your better stories, and trust me i've read a lot of your stuff. even for not having english as your first language you don't do too bad on your own;).
person Midnight Kyubbi
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are the absolute goddess of writing Naruto fics. I love ALL of your storys,really!!!
person blisblop
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it ,imagry of Sasuke practicing only topped by Sasuke putting his fingers in himself.Gawd.
person kyuubigirl
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Guh! Why, why do they keep getting better as I read on? Why when I think I've laughed and cried too much to i laugh and cry harder at each of your stories. I freaking just love how you do Sasuke's POV. He's a riot. I thought I was going to finish my own damn stories and ended up reading all of yours. LOVE YOU!
person losthimagain
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it and thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T-T (of joy XD)
person Stupidity Unleashed
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! That...was hilarious. I laughed, I swooned, and I awh-ed. T'was awesome^^ I love it. That whole Uchiha-crest-on-the-French-Maid-outfit was to die for! Simply genius. (nods to self)