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That was amazing, I love the NaruSasu first time fics, they are always sooooo cute. I also wold like to point out that your english is very impressive and I honestly did't notice that it wasn't your first language, the only mistakes I saw were ones that are commonly made! You did an amazing job on this fic and I truly did love it!!

~Ja!

Lyndsay

So that's why?!? Dear god for this being a second (third? forth?) language to you you're pretty good. I did notice some things that seemed to not fit; wrong usages of the 'to be' words and some strange ways of saying things, but considering that you haven't been speaking English your entire life, I think it's excusable! I know that if I tried to write in Spanish, my second langage for about two years, I'd have Spaniards howling in pain for miles. So good job on that account and let me get to what I'm sure you actually wanted to hear: the story.

When I first started reading this I was sure it was going to be, for lack of a better word, pointless smut--not that pointless smut is a bad thing...--but you were fast to prove me wrong. The story didn't go from point A to point Z immediatly like most 'pointless smut'. Instead it went from A to F(unny) to M(ental anguish) to Z(esty sex). And for a story that's main goal was sex that's pretty impressive! ......

...Look at me psychoanalysing a smut fic. I'm such a weirdo... I'll leave you to your normal reviewers now...

Nicely done. Crossdressing not something I read a lot, but this was beautifully done. You gave me some idea’s for my own story, and I might just put some in.

Wow! Sasuke turned out to be the uke! That was so fackin' cool! Total nosebleed there! What is your FIRST language, if you don't mind me askin'?!

This was so good though! WEGEHESAghWFESE -flails-

Wow! This was really good. I had a few minutes and I though, what the heck, I'll check this out, since she's reviewed me before. I have to say that at first I was skeptical about where this would go, but I really liked it. You have a great way of making both boy's likable at once. Usually I only either like Sasuke or Naruto, but seldom both of them at the same time! Thanks for writing this! I enjoyed!

wheeeee !!!!! that was great!! from beginning to end, i loved it... and major twist w/ sasuke=uke!! heheheh sweet dude, and ya gotta love them moaning insult names at each other ^__~ good job!

I thought it was freaking awsome,extremely entertaining and of course your lemos are hot and steamy yums yum

Loves Arry

*Nosebleed*

Are you serious? English isn't your first language??!?! Incredible job!!
That was the best written fic ever! Kudos to you!!

Q.O *nosebleed* hot!

Wow! I had good laughs and and very good nosebleed with this story. Good job!