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for The birthday suit

by Trollmia

person lo
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For English not being your first language, this was great. Sure there were a fre grammatical errors, but they were not bad, mostly in present tense and past tense and some plural and singular noun mistake, but great. THere are many people who are english speaking Americans that can not hope to write as well as you. Great job!!!!! This is great!!!
person blisblop
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Charming.Thank you.