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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is your first one? MAN you are gifted!
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think you described this pretty well with the word Tasteful. Its no smut fest but it was fun and interesting to read.
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww......^.^This was sooo cute!!!You`re awesome!^__^I always thought that they would make a perfect couple!!!!^_^Awesome job!!! I loved this fic very much!!!!!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, please continue if you can, I really want to see naruto and Hinata's relationship unfold. You havn't updated in a while but still you need to update, I would really like it.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good... I wouldn't mind seeing it contiued
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what i can say about this fic is one thing - just the best h/n lemon i read and i read almost evrything on fanfiction and mediaminer. For me this this is clasic!!!!!! I beg you write more h/n lemons!
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Super Great! I hope you add more chapters, it was enjoyable*blush* to read!
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Loved every bit of it! You did a very good job of gradually building up to the sex scene. And thank you for adding to the NaruHina FanFic community. Rock the Faith!
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good job, Especially since Hinata is my favorite character, don't write more chapters though, if you had rushed it too much sadly. This could have easily spread out to three chapters at the least if you had been careful, and would be more recommended for a story like this, of course if what you are focusing on is smut, then this fine, but if you are wanting a tasteful story, spread it out, don't worry about making it lemon right away. Also description is your friend.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought you did a terrific job on this story