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for To Love is to Lose

by Admantius

person Onawa
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah!!!! Great writing, but now I am going to have to find something happy to read!!!
person Vox
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I know. I've read it like ten-fifteen times. You should definetly try some more writing, 'cause you're really talented.
person kasumi-chan
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wait, what?? i don't get the end...but im just retarded, explain please?
person ZeldaFitz
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Didn't see that coming. Great story.
person vivacious
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow great story. so totally different from others. just wanted to thank you for posting it.
person Zamaza
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was really good. Poor Kakashi, double poor Iruka, he kinda uhm... yea.

My subconciousness is like that too. I'm typing up the closest thing I can to a dream I had where I was in San Fransico looking for Kakashi and then there was the chinese mafia and the underwater base in the middle of the city... It really made no sense, but it's stuck in my mind.

Not nearly as sad though.
person ruka
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is some story!!!!!!!
man first I thought how weird an OC kakashi was acting, but then it all made sense! Really a good story! too bad it was so short.