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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is absolutely wonderful. It is such a rich plotline and so well written. I hope you write lots more soon because it would be horrible if it didn't continue or finish. Love this!
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I love the interaction between Kakashi and Sasuke. I was wondering if you were going to continue the story, it hasn't been updated for a long time. I hope you do.
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I like this one! One image that really got me was the acupuncture needles. *shivers* That was intense. Somehow not directly stating what happened right then lets our imaginations run wild with possibilities. Hope Sasu-chan doesn't have nightmares about that as well. I hope you continue this one. It has so much potential.
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I'm so glad you updated and I can't wait for the next one!
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a great story, I'm loving it so far. You pay great attention to detail, so everything is easy to imagine. Everyone in the story has believably matured, and Sasuke's quite the cynic. You've already presented some very interesting challenges to the characters. Like not trying to kill each other. -sweatdrop- I'm going to keep an eye on this story... But is there any way I can bribe you into putting this on Fanfiction.net as well? They have story alert... and it seems this site doesn't... If not I'll just check into this every month or so. Keep writing.
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I haven't been on this website since last year, and I'm happy to see you updated. Your descriptions are so rich and vivid, I'm speechless. Great SasuNaru story, I hope you update this again soon.
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ I love this fic! It's so cool! Please do update it soon! I'll love you forever!
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey you're back!! Poor Sasuke, still in denial over the fact that he's human and needs friends and a sense of connection to life in general. But that mindset is slowly being eroded...it will be interesting to see this process that Sasuke has unwittingly started in himself. It wasn't Naruto's idea to join ANBU?? Hmmm. Makes one wonder what's up.
Wonderful chapter! I absolutely love this story and hope that it starts to come to you a little faster, it can be quite frustrating when one gets a great story started then it seems to slow to a crawl. So update when you can, I will still be keeping a close eye on this. Laters!! ^_^
Wonderful chapter! I absolutely love this story and hope that it starts to come to you a little faster, it can be quite frustrating when one gets a great story started then it seems to slow to a crawl. So update when you can, I will still be keeping a close eye on this. Laters!! ^_^
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! My sister praised your story, and urged me to read it. I'm glad I did. This is fabulously done! I can't wait to see where it goes next. Update soon!
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! An update!
I must say, I like the way this is moving along. Not too quickly, but not too slowly, either. I especially liked the part at the end, where Sasuke sort of joined in teasing Naruto, things sort of falling back into their old routine for a moment, even if Sasuke seems to be fighting that. I'm definitely looking forward to more interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. I also enjoyed Sasuke pointing out to Kakashi which mask Naruto had been given. Again, he was falling back into the old routine, protecting his teammate and friend in his own way. You've really made it seem like it's something Sasuke can't help; it just happens naturally, even though he tries to fight it. That seems very realistic to me, so even aside from the perfect grammar and excellent writing style, this story has more to it. You're very good at getting inside the characters' heads, and I love that.
I'll be waiting for your next update!
I must say, I like the way this is moving along. Not too quickly, but not too slowly, either. I especially liked the part at the end, where Sasuke sort of joined in teasing Naruto, things sort of falling back into their old routine for a moment, even if Sasuke seems to be fighting that. I'm definitely looking forward to more interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. I also enjoyed Sasuke pointing out to Kakashi which mask Naruto had been given. Again, he was falling back into the old routine, protecting his teammate and friend in his own way. You've really made it seem like it's something Sasuke can't help; it just happens naturally, even though he tries to fight it. That seems very realistic to me, so even aside from the perfect grammar and excellent writing style, this story has more to it. You're very good at getting inside the characters' heads, and I love that.
I'll be waiting for your next update!